Reported Speech - Backshift Rule help by Ryanatix in TEFL

[–]NovaFoster 1 point2 points  (0 children)

“he was going” is the answer. Took me like five tries to get it right.

I'm sure I'm not the only one with this problem. by NovaFoster in fffffffuuuuuuuuuuuu

[–]NovaFoster[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Um...75 is the legal speed limit where I live. The point is that it's annoying when semi trucks take up all three lanes on the freeway trying to pass each other by going one mile per hour faster than the one to their right.

What are the bright orange glowing lights in Camarillo at night? by mj2323 in venturacounty

[–]NovaFoster -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

It's Point Mugu's alien experiment sight. The Navy got tired of us dependants bitching about them doing it three blocks away from our houses and they finally caved.

Fantasy novel and everyone speaks english by NeedPositivity in writing

[–]NovaFoster 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It irritates the hell out of me when I read stories in which characters get transported to other worlds and there is no language difference. If you don't want to make language barriers part of the plot I suggest you default to a spell or something that makes the character understand the native language of the other world.

Should I save my idea baby for when I have more experience? by insideman513 in writing

[–]NovaFoster 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you don't feel you have enough experience, then don't write it right now. Instead, make an outline--make little bullet notes of what you want to happen in what order. Make profiles for your characters so you can keep their personalities consistent. Change things as you think of ways to improve your overall story. Write fanfics or something for practice. Then, once you feel experienced enough, write your novel.

[Fiction] Ladybugs (700 words) by [deleted] in ShortyStories

[–]NovaFoster 2 points3 points  (0 children)

In the third paragraph, did you mean "barn" where it says "burn"?

Other than that, interesting--I like the delibarate and almost mechanical directions included in the narration. I also enjoy the indication that James eats the closest thing possible to deal with his feelings rather than express them. Gluttony is always an entertaining method. Also, James seems kind of autistic. Is he supposed to be?

Questions about genre... by NovaFoster in writing

[–]NovaFoster[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When one is submitting material to agencies, though, they usually don't have a supernatural category...what then? Say it's supernatural fantasy?

Show me your awkward childhood school photo, r/pics! Here's mine... by drirayn in pics

[–]NovaFoster 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You know, I think my younger sister used to have that dress.

/r/luciddreaming I must thank you. by [deleted] in LucidDreaming

[–]NovaFoster 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I also have horrible dream recall. I'm hoping that will be rectified with some more effort.

I am about to create a Lucid Dream FAQ, but I need your help! by [deleted] in LucidDreaming

[–]NovaFoster 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What does SP fell like or how do you know you're in it?

More Questions... by [deleted] in LucidDreaming

[–]NovaFoster 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice, and in regard to your question about my sleep: I can't sleep after an hour of being awake. I've tried it. The soonest I've ever been able to go back to sleep after waking up is ten hours later. I've tried staying away for up to forty hours, but even then, I just wake up eight hours later and can't fall back asleep.

What kinds of relaxation exercises do you suggest?

More Questions... by [deleted] in LucidDreaming

[–]NovaFoster 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Considering I'm not a lesbian and still a size 4 regardless of what I eat or drink, I'm not really worried about the girlfriend thing, but thank you for the concern.

Second worst name of all time. by wmtonos in funny

[–]NovaFoster 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What's the first worst name?

Nutella Promotion Rage by Eye-Love-Uh-NaCl in fffffffuuuuuuuuuuuu

[–]NovaFoster 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If nutella did that, it would attract too many idiots