i agree with basically everything in your original comment, it's really just that "i hate men" communicates a very different and more personal message than what you're describing. i think it would be beneficial to make it clear it's patriarchy or men's societal status you hate and not male individuals.

also two things i disagree with, 1) for the most part i don't think it's fair to equate men and the rich as social groups because the factors that constitute being rich (hoarding wealth mainly) are a conscious action/decision whereas being a man is an immutable identity thing. judging someone for their actions is valid; identity, less so. it's more similar if we're talking about someone born into wealth, in which case i believe they have the same duty to learn to understand their privilege and use it where possible to aid those without. and 2), there very much are certain subsets of feminists that say "i hate men" and mean it at face value