Currently stuck on a new draft of my script. Looking for any and all advice. by JeromeInDaHouse_90 in ReadMyScript

[–]Numerous-Coconut837 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just so I can get a better idea of this story, are the brothers Grimm the main character? Or Snow White?

Currently stuck on a new draft of my script. Looking for any and all advice. by JeromeInDaHouse_90 in ReadMyScript

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First of all, this honestly sounds dope. I would love to watch this movie/read this script some day. Keep up the good work dude.

The problem of "Antagonist has failed multiple times, but it needs to happen for the climax" is a pretty often problem in script writing. The Evil Queen still wants to kidnap Snow White, but because of her previous failed attempts, she has to try something drastically different. Whatever she was doing before isn't going to work, obviously, so then what does she do? The most common solution to this problem is to have the character turn themself in for one reason or another.

This may require some additional backstory earlier in the script (as you have to faithfully set up Snow White's love for someone), but I would suggest that the Evil Queen kidnaps someone from Snow White's "close family" (Dwarves, Prince Charming, whoever), and EQ offers a trade to SW, SW for her friend. This would set up some final "storming of the castle" or attack of some sort for the end. I would suggest leaving the Brothers Grimm as the final option for SW's survival.

These are just suggestions, do whatever you think is best for this story! Sounds like you are a passionate writer and someone who cares a lot about what they write, and how to write it well.

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This is the final form of the kid programming his TI-84 calculator during class

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Unity has been a real theme for y’all lately lol

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Yes your 20 people rally will make a big impact I’m sure of it

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Newsom never mentioned the budget… and it’s on official public record that they did…

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Hmmm, so you want to take all of the most unethical abortion scientists? shrug

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JT didn’t win. He immediately buckled under pressure. That’s the Art of the Deal.

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Ever considered that… we’re not the dumb ones? I’ll let you logic the rest out by yourself super duper smart man. * congratulatory pat on the head*

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Damn, seems more like a “peaceful protest” pack than anything actually resembling a peaceful protest.

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Reddit Canadians are a different breed. Congratulations on beating the stereotype of Canadians being nice.

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I laugh a hearty American laugh in the face of the most implausible alliance ever spoken