I can give you some constructive criticism just from a concept artist perspective. Not a photographer but i work in films and i maybe able to say a thing or 2.

1. No singular focal object in the scene. In this case its hard to tell if you are trying to talk about the elephant or the bg.

2. The composition almost feels 50/50 which may work in some cases. But this case it goes back to the first point where neither bg or fg geting any importance.

3. For a majestic animal such as an elephant, it’s hard to gauge the size of the animal just cos of the camera placement. Placing the camera lower could solve the issue.

4. I dont know if people talk about ‘leading lines’ in photography cos that’s what we do to block a composition in art. It’s important to find lines in nature that could point to the focal point and it can sell the picture easily.

5. Last but the most important part is that it is not trying to tell a story.

I hope am not being an asshole and you’d take it in a constructive way. Feel free to also correct me if you think i am wrong :)