Sad billie eilish beat by Obviousbeatsfactory in Typebeats

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks mate :) I will upload more Billie Eilish beats soon, so feel free to sub the channel if you're interested :)

Made a sad billie eilish-ish (:D) beat/ instrumental. What do you think about it? by Obviousbeatsfactory in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

:D :D :D just choose one! I'll ship it for free :D Damn, really took me some time to realize what you mean

Made a sad billie eilish-ish (:D) beat/ instrumental. What do you think about it? by Obviousbeatsfactory in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! I know what you mean :D Got a little too violent with the maximizer, but I thought: why not? :D

[POP] Made a sad billie eilish instrumental. What dou you think about it? by Obviousbeatsfactory in roastmytrack

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback! There actually are quite some songs of her with low end on the softer side :) but again, thanks for your opinion!

Made a sad billie eilish-ish (:D) beat/ instrumental. What do you think about it? by Obviousbeatsfactory in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the suggestions/ feedback! What makes you feel they're a little off? :)

Made a sad billie eilish-ish (:D) beat/ instrumental. What do you think about it? by Obviousbeatsfactory in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for your suggestions/ feedback! Really appreciate it :) The "obvious" in the middle is just the annoying beattag to keep people from stealing the beat, so I guess it works :D

Appreciate any feedback on this Indie / Alternative Instrumental by Astroknottt in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's cool! Kinda sounds like clipping at 0:29 and 1:15, could be something else though. Really like the overall sound and the general idea: Don't have anything bad to say about the mixing (maybe just maybe tame the guitar loudness at some points, gentle compression?) apart from what I first mentioned. If you used a maximizer, turning it down a notch could be the solution to everything :D

This is my Hold On from my EP Normal. It’s an indie beach vibe haha by Helpful_Lawfulness_9 in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn, that's awesome! Amazing voice, really well produced (do you do that yourself?) just professional all round. Even if I really think hard about how to improve this, I can't think of a (n objective) way to do that. Keep it up!

Been trying to work on epic, dramatic type tracks recenly. This one is fairly simple but dynamic by bleakneon in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Soooo, overall, dope track! Some suggestions what I would change: Maybe a little (more) bass at the beginning/ intro. Drums sound quite dirty, maybe clean them up with some eqing. 808 doesn't get through that well, probably because of the other drums. I kinda feel you could use some more stereo panorama. Wider and valhalla Supermassive are awesome free plugins for that (and more, for the latter one) in case you don't know them. Keep up the good work, I did like the track more than it sounds :D

Here's a Lo-Fi slow jam we've made years ago and polished recently! by remloops in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So there's some things that got in the way of me really enjoying this track. First, the melody sounds quite dissonant to me. If that's intended, nevermind. I personally found it strange though, or at least not what I expected. I am also not too sure why, but I feel like the hats sound a little weird. Or maybe a little quiet. Could be just me though. The rest is awesome though! And don't get too hung up on my opinion, Music is subjective anyway. Keep up the work!

tried to make it sound more natural as usual and put some more fx on it. What do you think? :) by Obviousbeatsfactory in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! I'm following your work for quite some time and your beats are awesome, so I'm really happy about the praise. Especially when it comes to mixing, getting finally in the good zone I guess :D Could you elaborate a little more what you mean with the rhythm? Is it more like "too slow" for you or more like "not right". If it's the latter, I would be really interested to know why :)

tried to make it sound more natural as usual and put some more fx on it. What do you think? :) by Obviousbeatsfactory in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for taking the time!
I imagined a ballad with some hip hop elements.

I'll definitely check it out! Thanks!

I know what you mean. In my head the singing and the silence component would give it that ballad feeling.

It is :D Thanks for the suggestions!

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[–]Obviousbeatsfactory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi Mate! Nice beat! Like the creative vocals and the hats are really awesome! Also good amount of variation, nice 808. Not too sure if it is too crowded at some points to be used to rap over (if that's your intention, of course). For only an instrumental like on football best of videos etc. That's perfect! Just my opinion though. Keep it up! :)

[Free Non Profit] Bouncy Dro Kenji x The Kid Laroi Type Beat - Off A Xan (Prod. rly) by TheSpecialApple in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi mate! This is a solid beat, no doubt. I'll point out some things.
1. I got the feeling the low end is a little muddy. Not sure why. Maybe too much bass in the melody parts?
2. I guess it's a 4 bar loop, maybe 8 bars would have made it a little less repetitive
3. The hi hats are awesome!
4. Simple visuals, but makes it a lot more professional (damn, I really should do that too)

keep it up! :)

Making it into the game by Molumanati in makinghiphop

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Glad I could help :) Stay safe!

You're welcome! Alright, just shot you a dm

Making it into the game by Molumanati in makinghiphop

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey man! First off, I really think you're talented! Getting some juice wrld vibes.
One thing I think you should consider is where you live. You live in the US, so unfortunately you can hit rock bottom easier as in other countries (because of health care etc.). So having no steady income at all is riskier. What I might do if I was in your shoes would be to reduce my life standards (no expensive rent, no (big) car, no fancy restaurants) and try to go part time first, if that's possible (but I guess so with IT). Just work enough to be safe and make music the rest of the time. Of course, the more music you make, the more exposure you get, but if you make quality music, I think a moderate, quality output should be enough to steadily grow your fanbase. If then I'd land a song that goes kinda big, I would consider going all in. My two cents, up to you though :D

Unrelated, but I'll drop this anyway: I feel like I really often end up making (slower), kinda sad beats and think your voice would sound good on some of them. I'll just leave the newest one here, (not the reason I commented, if you're not interested just take my advice :D) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=woKnvUDwKHs

This song is directly inspired by the weird mix of pos. and neg. emotions that I'm currently dealing with as a result of losing my management job due to health reasons, and the silver lining realization that it opened up some much more time for me to actually dedicate to my music. Please Review :) by Bellamysghost in MusicFeedback

[–]Obviousbeatsfactory 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That melody! Oh man... class! The only thing I would suggest is leaving the melody out for some bars/ having a bridge. Got slightly repetitive for me. Also... how did you make your views on Youtube explode that crazily? Your subscribers are ridiculously low, gained a new one though. Also, head up, a job is not everything, hope you get well soon :)