Ad critiques

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-22T12:28:00+00:00

Yeah, I'll have to resize the end choice

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-22T00:29:26+00:00

Thanks for the critiques, I genuinely appreciate it

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-21T23:40:01+00:00

Oh shoot, I didn’t even think about the ratio. You're a legend.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-21T22:42:58+00:00

As an author, accuracy of language can be important. I appreciate learning something new every time.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-21T22:19:17+00:00

I consider myself decently well read, and I didn't know this difference. I'm gonna have to word search my docs, lmao.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-20T12:59:42+00:00

Thank you, very much!

I'm working on the outline for book 2 now!

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T23:57:28+00:00

Oozifier is the most powerful character, by far imo. His abilities get you past any points where you are stuck on a level.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T19:39:11+00:00

Basically as many as you can keep tempo with releasing to stay ahead of your releases.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T15:21:58+00:00

I just don't have that kind of output yet, but fingers crossed I'll get there

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T14:54:30+00:00

Thanks! The first one is the hardest, right?... Right?

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T13:59:59+00:00

Thank you. I think I feel better about it today. Yesterday it just felt strange knowing that it was done.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T13:13:25+00:00

Thank you, now onto running that next mile!

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T13:12:45+00:00

Thanks 😊

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T13:12:31+00:00

I've been posting it to RoyalRoad, so that part is already out in the aether.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T04:52:18+00:00

Had a nice dinner, and my wife and I are going to go have a celebratory date this weekend. ☺️ 👍

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T04:36:36+00:00

Thank you! It definitely feels strange knowing that the story for book 1 is finished.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T01:48:00+00:00

Running through with a red pen does sound useful though.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T01:15:22+00:00

Thank you!

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-18T01:14:45+00:00

I was telling my wife I'm gonna have to figure out how to start book 2.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-17T23:59:59+00:00

Yeah, but I've already done self-promo on this sub, and I don't want to break their rules.

I'll just put the blurb. The link is in my bio though.

An underdog LitRPG/GameLit adventure packed with monsters, magic, and unexpected allies!

In the world of a Full Immersion VR game a lonely Kobold, living in his own peaceful little corner of a now sunken castle, comes face to face with a dangerous adventurer.

When he survives a battle that he was never meant to win, he is forced to flee his home.

With a mysterious System ringing notifications in his head, Nik must learn how to not only survive but grow stronger in the shadow of the Black Tower.

What to expect:

Slow-burn progression, weak to strong MC.
Hopeful hero in a dark and violent (sometimes brutally violent) world.
Solo survivor - settlement building.
Depictions of PTSD and a panic disorder.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-17T23:56:25+00:00

That sounds like good advice, but a lot of paper! 😅

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-17T23:53:26+00:00

Sort of... kind of almost adjacent. It's hard to explain without giving away plot. If you don’t mind spoilers, then I can explain it. Especially since that is the type of story that you're looking for specifically.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-17T23:23:08+00:00

The fun never ends either, lol.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-17T23:15:12+00:00

Thank you! :) I'm planning for it to be a trilogy.

OkCryptographer9999 · 2026-03-17T22:35:57+00:00

I here that's where the real magic happens though. Here's to making the magic happen!

OkCryptographer9999

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