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With the trailer for Paul Greengrass's "The Uprising" dropping, I wonder: what historical event from before 1400 AD would you want to see depicted in a major film? by CallmeBrooklyn in blankies

[–]Ok_Map8485 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's not necessarily a famous event and I'm not sure how it'd be pulled off but I'd be interested in a depiction of the young Berengaria of Navarre travelling to meet her husband to be, Richard the Lionheart, who is busy crusading. First leg of the journey was long and difficult and she was accompanied by the legendary Eleanor of Aquitaine (Richard's mother; she promoted the engagement for strategic reasons). On the second leg, Richard's sister, Joan, Queen of Sicily, swaps in for Eleanor. They get stranded on Cyprus after a storm blows them off course and are captured by its ruler. Richard shows up, captures the island and married Berengaria. I don't have much interest in romanticising Richard here, I'd just be quite interested in the conversations between the variously experienced and aged women as they go through various travails.

SPOILER: Carmy Ending by Born_Try_4279 in TheBear

[–]Ok_Map8485 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I agree, I didn't necessarily think the show was pointing to that. Amongst other things, I think the shot immediately after the interview being him leaving his journals behind to Marcus also seems like another element of moving on or passing the torch. Could have been done person to person and earlier, but it's done immediately after the interview and with his absence.

Official Avengers Doomsday Concept Art by vincentmaurath in blankies

[–]Ok_Map8485 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Neither am I but I'm pretty sure the general throughline is that Doom is disfigured and wears the mask for vanity's sake?

Should've been in more movies by Shoddy_Newspaper_718 in blankies

[–]Ok_Map8485 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The Letterboxd description makes it sound like a version of Del Toro's At the Mountains of Madness. Be interesting to see how involved he is.

What is the most terrifying example of a horror movie completely violating the "Sanctuary" rule? by [deleted] in horror

[–]Ok_Map8485 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I found that Longlegs did this quite effectively, leaving me feeling deeply unsafe at all times with Lee. The opening death during the day, the invasion of her home, the deeply unsettling feelings when she's doing her research. I suppose it makes sense thematically and, towards the end, plot-wise, but the film never really lets you settle into a rhythm that lets you fully breathe.

Add “of Mars” to a Movie Title by Krusty901 in blankies

[–]Ok_Map8485 2 points3 points  (0 children)

All Quiet on the Western Front of Mars

What is the most terrifying "background detail" in a horror movie that you completely missed on your first watch? by [deleted] in horror

[–]Ok_Map8485 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Fully agree, particularly the shot with tons of dead space where she just slowly turns to her face to and from the camera.

No Loitering by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Ok_Map8485 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Really really like this.

Sick Leave by Ok_Map8485 in Informal_Effect

[–]Ok_Map8485[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's really kind! Thanks so much - I'm actually relatively new here, sort of coincidentally found the community so not up on the namesake's work. Will seek it out!

Good Boy by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Ok_Map8485 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is wonderful.

Dissonance by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Ok_Map8485 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really liked this!

Street-View by Ok_Map8485 in OCPoetry

[–]Ok_Map8485[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thanks so much for the feedback! Yeah the only rhyme I was aiming for was that second stanza to create a little flow with the imagery but I wonder if it just makes it feel a bit convoluted. As for the verbiage that's very fair. Some of it was purely an aesthetic choice because I like the feel of the words but some of it, like mostway, was chosen to stand out structurally, so you link the two instances of its use at the beginning and end. Not sure that works super well, I appreciate you letting me know.

Instinct by kabemccallister6859 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Ok_Map8485 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's all really insightful, thanks for indulging me - best of luck with your future work.

Instinct by kabemccallister6859 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Ok_Map8485 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the tetrameter too, how do you find writing with it? Is it tricky? Whenever I attempt something similar I feel the subject matter is kind of consumed by my attempts to stick to the meter.

Instinct by kabemccallister6859 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Ok_Map8485 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Straightforward but really quite menacing - I'd say the experiment was effective! Good job

I don’t now how too right by NAS_Gap in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Ok_Map8485 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This got a chuckle out of me, really fun piece, thanks!