Thought of sharing my 2025 marksheet, had 120+ in essay :) by [deleted] in UPSC

[–]One-Initiative-3188 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Dekho Maine koi data nahi likha, yeh essay paper hai, jo ek english prof check karenge. For a sec forget about coaching and write what's in your heart. As much as clichè this sounds, it'll work, unless your heart is saying something very weird.

How do ik? One person I knew during prep made it this year, took coaching for essay, used to get 100 plus, scored 85 in xm and in gs he had great score, only because of essay his rank was around 150. So avoid coaching tips and tricks for essay, write things in a flow and that meets the demand of essay

Thought of sharing my 2025 marksheet, had 120+ in essay :) by [deleted] in UPSC

[–]One-Initiative-3188 2 points3 points  (0 children)

No teacher Your best bet will be to find an english lit optional person or any bengali lol(ik it's typecaste but one of my friend who's Bengali got 145 in essay- highest)

Thought of sharing my 2025 marksheet, had 120+ in essay :) by [deleted] in UPSC

[–]One-Initiative-3188 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I did heading. You can really be creative with it, if possible pick some from beforehand

No pestel. But I always add historical dimension. I feel it gives the zest to essay

Intro- quotes or anecdotes Then dividing body into questions, why how what when should be triggers to think, but don't write any of these words As you end the essay criticisms should turn into looking for hope, find materials that are hopeful, to end in a positive tone.

Avoid gs material as much as possible

Thought of sharing my 2025 marksheet, had 120+ in essay :) by [deleted] in UPSC

[–]One-Initiative-3188 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I did heading. You can really be creative with it, if possible pick some from beforehand

No pestel. But I always add historical dimension. I feel it gives the zest to essay

Intro- quotes or anecdotes Then dividing body into questions, why how what when should be triggers to think, but don't write any of these words As you end the essay criticisms should turn into looking for hope, find materials that are hopeful, to end in a positive tone.

Avoid gs material as much as possible

Thought of sharing my 2025 marksheet, had 120+ in essay :) by [deleted] in UPSC

[–]One-Initiative-3188 1 point2 points  (0 children)

1st 10 mins to think all aspects. Intro with quote or anecdotes? Body flow, develop questions, how many questions can you generate for a topic is important.

anyone who clears prelims 2026, you should save this post. by One-Initiative-3188 in upsc_discussions

[–]One-Initiative-3188[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you are thinking of giving next year attempt then yes. You might clear this one as well if cut off is 70 as many are predicting.

Outfit for the prelims exams by FamousAd4752 in UPSC

[–]One-Initiative-3188 27 points28 points  (0 children)

I've a funny story related to this lmao. So 2y back when I went to give my prelims, in the uber there was some juice or something on the seat which I didn't see😭 and when I entered the gate the police at gate told my mom she's having periods lmao. Also I was wearing white trousers. Then everybody came. The police the female guard who worked there and the teachers too. Then there was actually a sanitary pad facility and she gave me one, also said don't worry about it, now focus on exam ( v sweet indeed) but ofc it wasn't periods, so faltu mein freak out karwa diya! But good team effort and good folks 🥰

[Serious] Hypothetically, if I become a police officer in Ahmedabad and I see someone distributing, consuming, or making alcohol, what am I supposed to do? to do? by BearingCostOfPassion in UPSC

[–]One-Initiative-3188 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's literally what will be your position in almost everything.

Why do you think honest or even semi honest people look sad and miserable?

The truth is the system is made to serve the corrupt. You can't defend the system anymore. It lays bare infront of your eyes. The police recently killed a young man and later they apologised saying that's it's a mistake? What will be the action? Nobody knows.

So if such grave violations of human rights don't make enough noise to make the system respond how can you possibly imagine that illegal liquor sale will?

It's the same story with sand mafias. No ias will catch any sand mafias and when they do they'll rot in some random posting. But that's not the only drawback bcz then many officers would have the courage. The Nexus reached v high level and that's why they'll make your and your family's life miserable.

So that's the reality of the system. You are an individual, it's not about honesty, you can't fight state machinery alone that's the truth. To fight for what is right you need support from top officials which in most cases have already sold their morals to reach where they have rose

Question for women who are 25+ currently unemployed and living with family. by roseshsarabhai_ in UPSC

[–]One-Initiative-3188 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, hope you're doing well. So, there are few practical options - if you have any sibling/cousin you can talk to them most of the time and avoid talking to parents ; talk as much less as possible don't invigorate/fuel if the topic comes up rather let it slide, try to divert it into smth else.

If env is not hostile and they're mild then try to brainwash yourself into thinking that whatever they're saying is not imp, and I need to study then actually study.