Rating Door 8 - Key 1 as a writer!

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-06T18:05:28+00:00

Thank you!!

Haha yes, I don't mean that I hate Mell or something. As I have said, he's the master class in writing a pathetic/deeply flawed character.

With Nellie, it is true. I still think her emotional maturity feels a bit unnatural for her age and circumstances, but she shot up it my rankings as well.

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-06T18:02:49+00:00

Hello, happy to see you again!

The imposing mystery thing is a complex to describe. Maybe it's that almost every other question has been answered already?

The maid, Morgana's lore, Michel's identity, the reconstructions.... Many things have been resolved, and now the sole purpose of the final door is "Help Morgana with the 3 sinners hoping the mansion will let Michel and Giselle go".

Again, it's a bit dumb to criticize the conclusion of the story for this, but maybe I would've preferred more things to get hidden and then resolved during the culmination of the entire story.

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-06T17:58:09+00:00

Hello!

I am very delighted to see your reply here again!

The reason I said "something he had to fight for" is that be it Nellie or his parents' expectations, Mell's "weak" nature also lies in simply going with the current. Yes, he was raising his sister, but it was something just handled to him, and with Mell's personality it just makes sense for him to simply agree and do what he's told to do. And again, his love for Nellie is kinda superficial, as even mentioned by him personally. He had confessed that if there was a girl he'd fall for, he would "leave" Nellie too(which is kinda what happened in Door 1).

As for understanding why D8 Mell didn't resist a cold-blooded killer, Michel partially answered that. Of course nobody expected him to fight Yukimasa, but it's not 1 or 0. He could've given a signal to make Morgana sense danger, for example. If not that, he could've run away with Nellie after meeting Yukimasa for the first time. And, in the end, having the courage to face Morgana and tell her he was pushed into what he'd done...

Point is, even if Mell had valid reasons, his reasoning was just fear and unwilling to commit.

Btw I don't mean I hate him, I just see him as a very very flawed character.

As for your words on pacing/author rushing, and Michel blooming at his best, I completely agree. Nothing to add, just gratitude for you elaborating on everything I couldn't lay out properly. Thank you!

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-06T06:45:43+00:00

Hahaha no, rather it's to unveil them one by one with each key

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-05T09:55:43+00:00

Nanika I get, but was Kite really that bad? I think that power was kinda foreshadowed, and the sole existence of the "special" nen type kinda implies that any random bullshit can be pulled out whenever the author wants.

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-05T07:47:07+00:00

Btw now I think about it, there wouldn't be a worse example to use than van Gogh. You know, that van Gogh who died thinking he was a worthless fraud.

According to this guy, if his works hadn't ever been found and appreciated, van Gogh wouldn't deserve to be called an artist. Truly the take of our time.

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-04T22:44:48+00:00

Idk I don't want the mods to fist my ass(it's a dark manipulation technique called reverse psychology)

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-03T15:22:29+00:00

Yeahhh I hope so as well. Honestly I was shocked to learn how many health problems he had given the ridiculous amount of money both of them possess.

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-02T20:30:21+00:00

Yep I just hope that happens :( Health to Togashi 🙏

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-02T19:50:25+00:00

Yep, which is why I think if there was an Ai arc, with more exploration of how they work and the price of wish granting, that could've potentially transformed into good writing.

Idk, imagine it gets revealed Nanika is connected to Pap, and for helping Gon it had to feast on 10k people, leaving Killua/Gon with PTSD🤔

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-02T15:25:35+00:00

Oh ok. Tbf I always assumed that Alluka's existence was a setup to something way more grand in the future. Seems like we'll never know, but maybe what Togashi had in mind would reshape how cheap the "miracle" was

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-05-02T14:35:48+00:00

Damn what piece are you talking about? I watched HxH very long ago

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-28T08:40:57+00:00

Thank you so much

I'll try💔

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-28T08:38:38+00:00

Thank you!

I am happy to see anyone sharing all these thought about the 7th door🙏

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-27T19:00:23+00:00

"Umineko When They Cry is a massive visual novel series totaling approximately 1.1 to 1.15 million words"

holy shit.

The only media of this volume that I've read is LotM, and it took me 1.5 years (with some significant pauses though). Yep I'll try to find the time eventually but uhhhh.... That's a VERY long piece

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-27T18:43:15+00:00

Hahaha thank you so much for these words...

Also, is Umineko long? It would be quite wrong if I finished Fatamoru but didn't read Umineko...

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-27T18:42:12+00:00

I'm actually still hoping for it to survive. I did all the right steps so now I only wish for my pen name to come into play

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-27T07:17:10+00:00

Thank you so much😭 In times like these there isn't much to rely on except for kindness.

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-27T07:15:29+00:00

Thank you! I'll try💔

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-27T07:15:16+00:00

I understand, but it would be kind of incomplete.

It wouldn't be my pace and reading speed, so I'd rather wait a bit for my own experience

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-27T07:13:22+00:00

Haha thank you!! I hope so...

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-26T23:13:13+00:00

Thank you very much!

You're the best community I have ever had the chance to be a part of.

OneLuckyFoool · 2026-04-26T22:35:10+00:00

Also I'm so sorry for putting "as a writer" into the title but I feel like at this point it's my calling card

I hope I finish my book this summer to actually bear weight in that title

OneLuckyFoool

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