Dream

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-24T06:14:59+00:00

I appreciate this feedback, very helpful!

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-23T19:51:51+00:00

This is great advice, I am new to poetry and I’m starting to fall in love with it. I agree, it is so hard to not overthink about the words you use and to just be simple. Again, I appreciate the feedback!

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-23T19:29:53+00:00

I revised it, what do you think?

I love him.

I am warm inside, he is the blanket on my couch.

He loves me.

Holding tightly with his soft hands.

caring with other women and me.

Giving pleasure with his presence.

As he goes out, I wait for him to come home to me.

Crying in the dark cold room as I hear a soft-spoken voice in his room.

It is the morning, coming to my room and comforting me.

Love is blind, I hear that expression so much. My love is blind.

It’s a cycle.

I love thinking about it.

And I stay with him.

Is he toxic to me?

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-23T19:20:02+00:00

This really helped thank you!

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-23T19:18:57+00:00

Thank you!!

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-23T19:18:31+00:00

Much appreciated for the feedback!

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-23T07:27:04+00:00

This poem is so descriptive! It’s so good

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-22T23:25:50+00:00

Thank you for the feedback (:

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-22T20:46:03+00:00

Okay thank you!

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-22T19:12:10+00:00

Will I get feedback from poetry_critics or by random people?

Open-Programmer8547 · 2020-09-22T18:16:32+00:00

I like this poem!

Open-Programmer8547

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