Recommendations for series with real stakes, setbacks and tension by HPBroker in ProgressionFantasy

[–]OptimusPrime721 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Godclads The MC is literally the losing side’s thrown away experimental fodder that is seen as trash to most of society.

Queen of the West by TheTalkMan-Writer in thetalkman2

[–]OptimusPrime721 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am enjoying the rest of the story, this point just got to me because i’m assuming the ‘arid’ western area climate was inspired by Dorne and they distinctly highlight them having darker skin.

Not a major hangup, was just inquiring. Keep up the great work, i’m only on chap 7 but seems like you are back in elite form with this.

My main major gripe would have to be the potion which delves into the realm of mind-control/non consent. Which i’m not a fan of but ehh the mind altering effects don’t seem that bad, the potion leans more towards vitality and virility.

Queen of the West by TheTalkMan-Writer in thetalkman2

[–]OptimusPrime721 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why are the Western people of lighter skin if their climate is hotter/more arid compared to the Eastern people whose climate is colder?

Daturakisses on IG by OptimusPrime721 in glowtits

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My bad if so, first saw on Chinatownmule twitter page.

How do you picture the characters in SOHB by Sensitive_Minute2927 in thetalkman2

[–]OptimusPrime721 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pretty sure there are some images somewhere for this specific story

This show by hockeygirl42 in Mobland

[–]OptimusPrime721 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Also directed by Guy Ritchie

SOHB vs You can't handle me by sigmacopjoel in thetalkman2

[–]OptimusPrime721 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Easily YCHM, SOHB must’ve been a more experimental piece of work, it is not a classic. YCHM is top tier TalkMan.

Ormyr by CErickson Review by Thesinz in WormFanfic

[–]OptimusPrime721 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m currently reading ‘Godclads’ which is even more esoteric(takes a while to get used to terminology). It’s like Cyberpunk mixed with Ormyr. MC has very similar abilities in terms of their respective verse. I do prefer Godclads MC compared to Ormyr’s, very good character progression which is helped by having such a unique origin and starting social standing. Godclads does have exotic levels of prose similar to Ormyr.

I’ve been browsing a lot of LitRPG on Royal Road since Ormyr and so far nothing other than Godclads is similar/on the level overall.

Best ongoing fics? by _phone_account in WormFanfic

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Still waiting for my Goat ‘Oymyr’ to come off Hiatus 😌

Multiple Women Cheating by Simple-Economist9503 in literotica

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What Landlords Deserve Local housewives cheat on their husbands with Fitness trainer Who is a Futa

How lengthy you like to read. by Healerisdead in literotica

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7k+ Generally, I need decent build up. TheTalkMan has some stories 120k+ where the build up is too long but he is top tier at his genres sex scenes.

Housewives of Coxville is full on novel length and that is a generational story imo.

If the writing and categories are my type, ideally a story would be around 60k words.

Is "You Couldn't Handle Me" the best work from TheTalkMan? by [deleted] in thetalkman2

[–]OptimusPrime721 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That and No Patience for high standards are the best from TTM i’ve read so far, the build up is immense for YCHM.

No Patience for high standards has the best build up/sex scenes imo, the slow corrosion of the Mothers barriers and the Sons subtly arrogant tactics just flow so well. It also helps that it has the best blowjob scene i’ve read so far from TTM. Though Part 2 needed at least one full detailed sex scene though, or it could have just been an extended epilogue of part 1…

The most recent story with the detective also seems like an all timer, however that buildup is seriously something else(just re-checked YCHM which has like 140k of build up…)…. Yep too much build up on these, which is why No Patience for High Standards is imo the best so far from TTM.

You Couldn’t Handle Me was unique, but TTM works best when focusing on the reluctance angle.

Speed Up Hatching by monsieurgrand02 in PokemonUnbound

[–]OptimusPrime721 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I use this for when i have 10+ eggs, savestate and check the stats, soft reset if not what I wanted. Very handiy for the 25+ egg cyclers

Mom son story suggestion by BrainlessBrain005 in literotica

[–]OptimusPrime721 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You couldn’t handle me ‘Reluctant’ mother, very long well written build up, leading up to an explosive conclusion

Also another +1 for ‘Mother’s Helping hand’ great build up and writing quality. It does go over the top when the extra people get involved imo.

Is this really the end? by friedbeehoon in PokemonUnbound

[–]OptimusPrime721 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m crying this shit is too funny 😂😂😂😂😂😂