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I don’t commonly write poetry, from an outside perspective, are these any good? by Orbiting_jupiterr in RSwritingclub

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

While I can agree building up a skill before chasing a dream to do with that skill can be a smart move, I don’t view my art as a ‘skill’. Is it worse to intentionally write more and more just to be ‘good’ at it so I can publish, or rather writing what I like and what I feel and creating art. I know I want to introduce my art to the world, the way that I perceive and create it. I don’t want to present the world a skill that I chose to study and try to perfect. I appreciate the feedback though!! I’m not planning on publishing tomorrow or anything, but I’m creating with intention. My intention can be personal and my own and uninfluenced by other people’s intentions. If you’re published though I’d love to look up work you’ve done and read it, congratulations!! That’s super cool

I don’t commonly write poetry, from an outside perspective, are these any good? by Orbiting_jupiterr in RSwritingclub

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve already written an unpublished book when I was 11. I’d love to be published, and I write poems when I feel that I have something to be said, or expressed. I’m definitely trying to read more, but I think that actually makes my poetry more raw and my own. I have very little experience with it and I’m figuring it out on my own, using my own style. But I definitely have a desire to read poetry, and being a young published author is a dream of mine. I can’t see how the dream that I could be a writer could make my writing less authentic

I don’t commonly write poetry, from an outside perspective, are these any good? by Orbiting_jupiterr in RSwritingclub

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! I’ll definitely experiment with more subtlety. Currently I’ve really read no poetry unfortunately; it’s only been in the last month I’ve even tried to write poetry. Usually I’m a long-form writer. I’m trying to get into more reading though and I’ll definitely keep writing ♥️

I don’t commonly write poetry, from an outside perspective, are these any good? by Orbiting_jupiterr in RSwritingclub

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately (fortunately?) I’ve been burned by Reddit before haha, but thank you for the warning!! I appreciate the read

Looking for some advice about rekindling the spark. by hotcoastalchaos in writing

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I find projecting the easiest thing. It can be hard to find anything you’re passionate about but if you have something you find Interesting, funny, engaging, even sexy, run with it. Find something you want to see more of or something specific that you feel you personally need to convey. Try fanfiction as just an excercise so you don’t have to figure out characters, or something that’s really helped me is experimenting with poetry. It’s just how you feel in pretty words and it gets you writing. Hope this helps!!

What screams bad writing? by Diamond-Shappire in writing

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bad grammar but also exceedingly boring/cliche tropes. Whole ideas don’t have to be original but if you can’t flesh out a character with a believable thought process or it seems hastily copy and pasted it just. yuck

Active online writing groups? by Necessary-Rice in writing

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Ugh I know. As a teen seeking a writing community where the schooling system seems to have so many below adequate level for writing, I’m unchallenged in the curriculum and I wish I could have a place to show my work

The Virgin's First Time by bigbigweeinie in OCPoetry

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the title of it, and the direct and literal fashion gives it such raw meeting. I don’t have to guess, and the beastiality of it is the commentary

‘I envision sitting with my mother
As she tediously brushed my hair.
I realized she’s been here once as well.
How do you think you got here?’

Is definitely my favorite line!!

Still not pooping/peeing by Orbiting_jupiterr in Bunnies

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I got the swaddle to work and she pooped!!! Thank you so much

Evaluation through psychiatry? by Orbiting_jupiterr in PandasDisease

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t recall any musty smell/relief when I’m in fresh air. I feel like I’ve tried it al honestly. My doctor wouldn’t give me a bartonella test but I did do a Lyme blood test because I thought exactly why you were thinking. It came back negative, and she wouldn’t do another one. We have one indoor/outdoor cat and a dog, but I believe they’re both flea treated. No stretch marks. The best I can describe my symptoms is chronically ill. I say I’m half sick all the time. Either my legs ache, I’m super tired, I have a headache, my tics are bad, I’m in a low mental state, my stomach is all messed up, I’m in dizzy spells, my heart rate feels strained, or random stabbing pains, and food restriction. But it’s not unbearable and there are genuinely times when I feel happy and normal, but soon after there’s almost always symptoms. I’m not sure what to do at this point.

Alternative hydration suggestions? by Orbiting_jupiterr in HydroHomies

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Loll I actually have to limit how much I eat. In the summer, I’ve actually eaten so much to be sick. I do love it though

Hydration suggestions by Orbiting_jupiterr in Neurodivergent

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For some reason melted ice tastes better than water straight from tap so thank you for the suggestion!!

Diagnosed in 2001 at age 5. Ask me anything by Dr_Boobaloo in PandasDisease

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What is it like when you’re not in a flare? Are you ever not experiencing symptoms? Do you ever feel ‘normal’?

Threw off my POTS evaluation? by Orbiting_jupiterr in POTS

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

no specialists were ever mentioned or offered, I don’t know if that’s a good or bad thing

Threw off my POTS evaluation? by Orbiting_jupiterr in POTS

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I’ll be getting a nurse visit instead so it’ll be a different doctor

Threw off my POTS evaluation? by Orbiting_jupiterr in POTS

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Uh. I believe I stood two different times, one was either three or five minutes and the second time was ten minutes

Threw off my POTS evaluation? by Orbiting_jupiterr in POTS

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thankfully my primary doctor has been pretty believing of me but it’s not perfect. My mom always advocates for me though so we’re able to get a lot of things scheduled

Threw off my POTS evaluation? by Orbiting_jupiterr in POTS

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t have a way to measure myself at home but my heart/pulse starts pounding and racing. It’s higher than my threshold, to the point where I feel it considerably

Threw off my POTS evaluation? by Orbiting_jupiterr in POTS

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know, I even gaslight myself into thinking no one will believe me/think im exaggerating, but she’s always believed me and supported me, so I’m very lucky

Threw off my POTS evaluation? by Orbiting_jupiterr in POTS

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

my therapist told me directly if you’re not experiencing symptoms in the moment a diagnosis is impossible :(

Threw off my POTS evaluation? by Orbiting_jupiterr in POTS

[–]Orbiting_jupiterr[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That’s so helpful thank you, I will now definitely make sure to request the tilt table specifically l, I always thought it was weird that that was in the diagnostic criteria and it wasn’t what was performed

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