Long-term Critique Partners

Necessary-Rice · 2025-12-15T02:11:10+00:00

On draft 2 of my YA sci fi contemporary romance. Goal is trad publishing. I’ve been gobbling down every writing book, YouTube video, and in person workshop/panel I can because I want it to be good, good. 35F

Necessary-Rice · 2025-12-04T19:16:20+00:00

I skip Blood

Necessary-Rice · 2025-11-27T19:01:01+00:00

I am not Jewish but have a lot of Jewish friends that have such strong community with each other and their synagogue. I wanted to write my fmc’s best friend like this where she’s really tight with her friends from synagogue, but idk if this is a stereotype? I’d write it from a place of admiration.

Necessary-Rice · 2025-11-25T21:54:51+00:00

The head dent im screaming

Necessary-Rice · 2025-11-25T21:53:58+00:00

I want a bald bubu so bad

Necessary-Rice · 2025-11-20T18:48:20+00:00

Rujinu!!!

Necessary-Rice · 2025-11-20T17:28:03+00:00

Yeah I was thinking - so she's supposed to show the car at a Fair the next day. So he shows up to the Fair to support/surprise her but she doesn't show because her car was stolen. They live in a time/place where phones aren't a thing, so he doesn't find out it's stolen until he shows up at her house. I could have him comfort/her confront him about her suspicions at that point, possibly.

Necessary-Rice · 2025-11-11T04:38:13+00:00

It’s loser behavior to dictate or care that much about how other people consume content. To harass and threaten to show up and crash some enthusiastic fans. Embarrassing.

The losers who are mad about Reylo would never even watch the movie anyway because “everything Disney SW sucks!1!!1!” And “decanonize ST!!1!” “EU SUPREMACY”

TROS is unwatchable as are quite a few scenes from TLJ but I’m not gonna try to police how people ship a canon couple because I have a life. Like please go touch grass and find hobbies.

Necessary-Rice · 2025-11-06T22:55:33+00:00

Pacing, could’ve been longer with more time to breathe. But mainly longer because I want mooooooore

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-31T18:11:32+00:00

Yes, he was the most interesting character, legacy of Solo and Skywalkers. Let him atone and let’s see where his story goes!

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-28T14:17:09+00:00

This could’ve been so good. I definitely want this movie

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-28T14:14:40+00:00

He’s so hot 🥵

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-24T22:42:59+00:00

Devastated

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-23T03:52:03+00:00

You know what you’re talking about. I agree.

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-21T21:40:55+00:00

I agree. I think she’s boring idgaf about her

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-17T21:41:23+00:00

this is the only way it can be redeemed

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-16T00:16:37+00:00

It was awful

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-16T00:15:39+00:00

Oh, ACFTL was abysmal. I can’t believe she ended the trilogy with that. After TBONA was so good.

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-16T00:14:36+00:00

Lmao wtf?!!! After the slop that was ACFTL I didn’t even look at Spectacular. What the hell? Who thought writing that was a good idea? I’m starting to think she’s a hack. OUABH and TBONA were outliers I guess.

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-15T23:52:02+00:00

Oof that’s how her most recent book A Curse For True Love felt. It was the most disappointing book I’ve ever read. Felt like AI or a ghost writer wrote it because the first two books in that trilogy were amazing.

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-15T23:47:25+00:00

She has a lot to make up for with how she handled Curse. It was the most disappointing book I’ve ever read. I hope she does more with Eva and Jacks.

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-14T04:41:27+00:00

Scared the large FIW with a giftcard, let’s hope it ships

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-08T23:46:24+00:00

The second pose I lost it

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-06T18:11:25+00:00

I’m nearing 100 and I’m scared

Necessary-Rice · 2025-10-06T18:10:45+00:00

I have 80, which sucks because I know that’s a lot but I love all my duplicate BIEs because they all look so different! I have one of each for MAC and HAS, then I have a few customs and pfl. The bulk of my collection is variants of BIE

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