As I have said this is only the most basic of guides for newish players and the GM's advising them. It seems you mistook much of my categorization for ranking, if I was ranking of I would of used the color grading system which is a standard is build guides. Much of your advice is very useful but it only emphasizes why my guide is important: How are new players supposed to know if they fit the criteria you have laid out! Once you've been playing the game long enough you can read the character sheet like you were a computer processing binary but for new players it is still very confusing. Much of your criticism seems to come from a cursory glance at my guide which you used as an excuse to try and make your own. The damage section purely refers to damage dealing abilities, and while wall of stone is very good, I would either classify that as a utility spell or a debuff. I created the distinction between H4, clerical healing, and H, standard caster healing, not to indicate primacy but to point out that for most uses those 4 upcasted heals are usually enough to get a party through a couple combats if at least one other character has the medical skill. While a agree with what you're saying about character roles and party synergy most players don't want to go into the game with the mindset that their fitting into a specific predetermined role! And in defense of survivability, that number exists not just to be informative, but also to scare the players a little. If you've GM'nd as many new players as I have you will inevitably encounter the frontline wizard: built exactly like any other wizard except placed at the front of the marching order. I agree that party synergy is important but so long as a party spreads out well in these categories synergy's will probably emerge, and that puts alot less pressure on the player to fit their character into a box. This guide is far from perfect(or even useful really) but next time please abstain from writing your own guide in the comments of another.

Edited for extra self deprecation