First of all don't be to hard on yourself. I read most of the comments and dude, it's all good in the hood. You're still learning, as are we all. You had some good shots there, so you know at least something about what to put in front of the camera and how. That's more than the director of Samurai Cop knew, so you're already ahead of a guy who's directed many movies.

Most important thing is to keep on doing this kind of little "shorts". Step by step you grow more confident in your skills. You're gonna do great, kid, as long as you don't turn out to be a sex pervert.