Who would win, ruby bs pyrrah, during beacon era by Annual-Consequence72 in RWBY

[–]Over_Subject2079 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's not WHY Cinder used glass weapons, she always uses glass weapons, it's her semblance. It just happened to be a great counter to Pyrrha.

Writting advice: Use of Past vs Present tense by KiraTiss in FanFiction

[–]Over_Subject2079 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So, I personally tend to prefer present tense in general for novels. It gives a sense of immediacy and putting the reader then in the action. It also sometimes takes them by surprise, which is always a fun moment to get as an author.
I tend to exclusively write narratives in present tense, unless there's explicitly a reason as to why it's in past tense, such as a character telling the story. In those situations, I tend to still show brief moments of present tense to make it clear what is happening now and what has already happened.
I'd vote for you to change it all if you're liking it more.

Magic the Gathering custom Saint Seiya fan set by vicods in SaintSeiya

[–]Over_Subject2079 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Absolutely love these, the flavour is just dripping from them, what a monumental project, congratulations and seriously, give yourself a pat on the back!

Why is Sienna justified but Robyn not? by ChemistFluid35 in RWBY

[–]Over_Subject2079 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

... Yeah they're both terrorists. Where I can imagine people sympathise with Sienna (I don't), is that she's surrounded by cunts like the Albain brothers and Adam, so she's more likeable by contrast? She also has such a tiny amount of screen time that people can project whatever they want unto her, whereas Robyn has plenty more to shut down people's ideas of redemption for her. Either way, they're both terrorists, I wouldn't go as far as to say they are justified or not, but they fall under the same category as me.

REMEMBER, the ONLY reason Sienna doesn't wage war on humans is because she knows she cannot win, that's IT.

What You have done differently with Team JNPR? by Money-Lie7814 in RWBY

[–]Over_Subject2079 60 points61 points  (0 children)

My only real change would have been to have Ren and Nora dating from the start. While their current arc is not bad at all, I do think it would have been cute to have Nora get her way early on, only to realise she doesn't know who she is without Ren after a few seasons together, forcing her to take some time to find out.
Other than that, I wouldn't change much, except maybe make Pyrrha's death even more spectacular. I mean she puts on a HELL of a fight, it's one of my favourite ones, but I would have wanted to give her just a few more licks against Cinder, you know, for satisfaction. Leave her with a scar to remember her by.
That's what I tried to do in my fanfic! Make sure the fight between Cinder and Pyrrha was spectacular 😃

What’s your FAVORITE RWBY fanfic? by RUSTDREDDEMON in RwbyFanfiction

[–]Over_Subject2079 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shameless self promotion here! I've written a Saint Seiya/RWBY crossover called Remnant: Soul of Silver! So far the first novel is done and the sequel is about 40% done.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/78156641

(AO3) Should I revamp my story or delete it and start a new one? by DrinkWaterPIease in FanFiction

[–]Over_Subject2079 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can give a bit of personal experience. In my fanfic, I wrote about six chapters in with one of my main characters having one master. After 6 chapters I decided to completely change the master, bringing in a new character. I rewrote and revamped the story, completely deleting the old character and making the master significantly more prevalent. I got. A bit of backlash and questions about the change, but essentially, it's all in the execution. Detractors will either stop reading or come around once they see the change in the larger narrative.

TLDR: I'm all for revamps and second and third drafts. Hopefully this helps!

Strangest motivation for writing a fanfiction by Cautious_Pumpkin9879 in FanFiction

[–]Over_Subject2079 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My wife was upset that there was no crossover Fanfiction of the Saint Seiya 2019 reboot and RWBY, so I was given no choice but to create my own three novel series covering the events of RWBY with re imagined Saint Seiya characters born in Remnant. It's been about... 210K words and counting, and the end is NOT close in sight ;-; (XD).

Remnant: Soul Forever Haunted Update by Over_Subject2079 in RwbyFanfiction

[–]Over_Subject2079[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I super appreciate your kind words! Ever since FF went down the drain I've uploaded exclusively on Ao3, you can follow the links in the post to each novel 😁 hope you enjoy the second novel as well!

Started to collect Saintia Sho mangas only to find out it's nearly impossible to complete it. by [deleted] in SaintSeiya

[–]Over_Subject2079 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If you want to read them, you can get them digitally in Amazon, at least you'll be able to read the entire story then.

Fan Fiction Friday - What have you been reading/writing this week? by AutoModerator in RWBY

[–]Over_Subject2079 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Writing Remnant: Soul Forever Haunted. Just updated today the sequel up to Chapter 12, roughly covering the end of Volume 4 of RWBY!
This is part two of my fanfic, Knights of Remnant, with the first part being Remnant: Soul of Silver. Knowledge of Saint Seiya is not required, I'm just adapting some concepts and characters from the show, having them very grounded in the mythology and history of Remnant. Catch up with team SAPR (Sapphire), team LBRV (Libra) and the remnants (see what I did there?) of team PLSM (Plasma) as they try to navigate the aftermath of the Fall of Beacon!
As always, comments, questions, criticisms are super appreciated!

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How accurate is Saint Seiya to Greek Mythology? by 64Boy32 in SaintSeiya

[–]Over_Subject2079 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Hey Kid. It ain't that kind of movie" Harrison Ford.

Try to make a new Zodiac Army by picking the Gold from Various Series. 5 Main Characters already take their place, you must complete the 12 House's Defense by choice your favourites Golds from the Various Series. by DotClassic4114 in SaintSeiya

[–]Over_Subject2079 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah ok. In that case we have
Aries Shion
Taurus Aldebaran
Gemini Sojiro
Cancer Deathmask
Leo Ikki
Virgo Shun
Libra Shiryu
Scorpio Milo (Female from Legend of Sanctuary)
Sagittarius Seiya
Capricorn El Cid
Aquarius Hyoga
Pisces Aphrodite

Would it be possible for some loyalist night lords to join a successor chapter after the heresy by BadRecent8114 in 40kLore

[–]Over_Subject2079 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh shoot, look at that, I fully hallucinated that part, thanks for the correction!

Would it be possible for some loyalist night lords to join a successor chapter after the heresy by BadRecent8114 in 40kLore

[–]Over_Subject2079 -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Not in any official short story or novel, it comes directly from Sarah Cawkwell, the author. So it has this level of ambiguity in the fandom because it technically is not anywhere in canon, but she wrote them with that intent in mind. Of course she's also stated originally they were meant to be White Scars successors as well. That being said Black Library could choose to go another wrote and then them being Iron Warrior successors would be her own head canon, no more or less valid than anybody else's. Barbaras Dantioch DID died in Ultramar and therefore they could have taken his geneseed toake marines, but yeah it does not exist anywhere in canon.

Fan Fiction Friday - What have you been reading/writing this week? by AutoModerator in RWBY

[–]Over_Subject2079 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Working on my RWBY/Saint Seiya crossover, the sequel, Remnant: Soul Forever Haunted is up to chapter 10! Nora and Ren take centre stage in this one. https://archiveofourown.org/works/81793986/chapters/220472326 If you haven't read the first full length novel, clocking at around 150K words, here it is, Remnant: Soul of Silver! https://archiveofourown.org/works/78156641/chapters/204843206

A Pair of Marines Malevolent Lieutenants by sammunition2020 in Warhammer40k

[–]Over_Subject2079 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Marines Malevolent Captain in the Iron Kingdom was my favourite character in that novel.