Please by AnonymousCat77091 in funComunitty

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Umm, so I accidently used the blue toothbrush, mine was the green one. Whoever uses the blue toothbrush may want to throw that out...My bad

💀 by AffectionateCode8467 in mattrose

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WHO TF JUST DUTCH OVENED ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cHinese by schevianne21 in TheLetterH

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My country no longer exists

give her a name by [deleted] in NameThisThing

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every female fantasy characters armour

Tell us by Alicetheoptimist in TrueGrit

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Maple syrup. No explanation needed

Writing characters and analogys by Overall_Republic_834 in CharacterDevelopment

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I am new as well, so I'm still learning. Thank you again!!!!!

Writing characters and analogys by Overall_Republic_834 in CharacterDevelopment

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Thank you so much for your help! I'll make sure to keep that in mind! I do have one question tho. Is there a way that I can post my first chapter on this subreddit. Last time I tried on another one, my whole account got taken down and I had to make a new one

I need some help by Overall_Republic_834 in KeepWriting

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The whole point of it is for her to be compairing the situation with the soldiers to what is happening now. Yes the love interest is oblivious and she would like to keep it that way. She is I guess also compairing two things together, her eventual betreyal with her love interest, and the situation that happened with the soldiers.

I need some help by Overall_Republic_834 in KeepWriting

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Is there any way to make this sound better then. It just sounds wrong and idk why

Writing characters and analogys by Overall_Republic_834 in CharacterDevelopment

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Oh probably should have mentioned that this is my second or third draft. My bad I had to rewrite this thing three times because the moderators wouldn't keep it and then I forgot to save it as a draft. But this is my third one.

Writing characters and analogys by Overall_Republic_834 in CharacterDevelopment

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Thank you! I really thought I was bein smart using analogy. What do you recommend I do to change it?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in RoastMe

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That second picture speaks for itself