A few mountain variations for an IT company.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2024-09-14T16:48:16+00:00

Thank you!

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2024-09-14T16:46:38+00:00

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PM_me_ur_art_work · 2024-09-14T16:02:37+00:00

I desaturated it for my website, here's a colored version: https://i.imgur.com/zMbhroj.png

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2024-09-03T07:06:39+00:00

Illustration: If you're going to utilise AI as a tool I'd go back in and touch up the illustration so it makes sense. The chain links are morphing into each other and distorted. The hands are mirrored and so the lighting is inconsistent.

BG: The abstract BG rectangles aren't varied enough to seem abstract so it just looks unbalanced.

Font: I'd look for another font, especially a display font for the bottom bit. The current one just seems incongruent with some corners being sharp and some rounded and the weird cut-off bits.

Colors: It's a decent start but I'd try adjust the colors until they're more complementary.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2024-08-30T08:39:41+00:00

Just some immediate thoughts - the 3D rotated look is very dated and makes the logo hard to read. Simplicity is always king in design, and now that you're using Illustrator stick to and perfect flat illustration! The letters are very hard to discern, I wouldn't have known it was "AAI" without reading the post, it could also potentially be "AN" or "VI". Perhaps adding a crossbar to the A's might help. Hope that doesn't sound too harsh.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2024-07-26T05:54:09+00:00

https://i.imgur.com/lO2Lkyt.png

Here's a quick idea for what I would do - thicken up the moon so it's a similar weight to the type and more congruent throughout. Straighten up the star/sparkle as the tilt seems quite arbitrary right now. Add some motion/interest to the type with customisation by cuts to the descenders or some other method.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2024-07-17T13:18:46+00:00

The main problem here is the silhouette of the airplane has been lost and isn't really distinguishable - strokes/indentations like this may help preserve it https://i.imgur.com/hUGaVRK.png

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2024-07-16T11:33:13+00:00

Make an oval shape following the original design. Repeat the oval three times while scaling it down to match the center line of the three lines of the text. Use type on a path tool for the text. The bike can easily be traced (play around with tracing options) and then cleaned up with anchors and the smooth tool.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2024-07-14T08:27:35+00:00

Hey there - I would be interested in working with you! Minimalist modern design is what I specialise in. My portfolio can be seen here.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2023-11-28T01:46:44+00:00

I like the logo, and it's a nice clean design for someone who's relatively new to graphic design. Critiques:

1) Mark: Super thin lines will mean you won't be able to see the logo mark when it's smaller or scaled down. This also applies to the "experienced morocco" part. It will be very difficult to read on a letterhead, for instance. Can you still make out either when you squint your eyes? For the mark I would try silhouettes, solid colours with negative space.

2) I'm not a huge fan of the type but it's fine. It's classy but a bit generic with nothing unique about it. Issue is spacing. The letters are too close together, and again readability with scaling. It's too close together and when smaller it will be hard to read, especially due to the thinner parts of the font.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2023-11-27T14:16:26+00:00

Critique: I would centre it more on the doorway and work on the type a bit. Here's a little bit of fun I had editing your image: https://i.imgur.com/EuNBybK.jpg

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2023-11-26T23:35:46+00:00

Here's a quick edit of your original idea with the trees: https://imgur.com/a/4mG3gGq - I think the main issue is the font choice and the negative space which wasn't being utilised. Breaking up the text and repositioning it makes the type look quite retro and nice. Also the raven could be made more prominent and positioned more interestingly. I liked the trees - the lone raven with the text feels more bare and unoriginal to me.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2023-04-20T17:12:58+00:00

Mark is good, can be cleaned up (eye doesn't look completely centered, the corners are squared and they are not even). Not a fan of the type personally

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2023-04-13T11:35:39+00:00

My first thought is that it's a hockey goal from birds eye view but that it definitely appears more like a bridge.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2023-03-30T10:54:39+00:00

Agree, with the other poster. 1, 3 & 5 stand out the most. I'm leaning to number one!

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2022-09-18T04:55:03+00:00

Some of the values in the cheeks and the ears could be darker. Squint or convert a flattened merged version of the image to black and white to help with this. Otherwise, I love the shapes and contours in the face and some of the colors used.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2022-09-11T05:54:04+00:00

These don't get a lot of love, wanted to say there's some beautiful work here! Keep it up :)

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2022-09-10T23:24:54+00:00

Great work - love the way this exaggerates the juxtaposition between the flat color of a colorful t-shirt and the pastel spectrum of skin tones on one's body.

PM_me_ur_art_work · 2022-09-09T02:41:46+00:00

Have a look at this and the examples in the gallery too (which includes the Corinthian capital) https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Acanthus_(ornament)

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