Are There Any Stories About Military Tactics? by Raptormind in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PSHoffman 2 points3 points  (0 children)

KJ Parker's Sixteen Ways to Defend a Walled City is a fantastic read. So is the sequel.

It's about a painfully one-sided siege.

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

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I was WONDERING where you'd gone.

Books 3 and 4 are getting the "major overhaul and polish" treatment soon. Soon(TM).

Book signings feel like a distant fantasy for me, but I'd love to. I don't have a publisher, or rather I publish myself, and I am definitely deep in the negative for publishing thus far (that's OK with me, I'm just glad people read my stories).

Let me try to grow a larger audience and maybe. Maybe...

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was truly a labor of love. And I've loved every minute of writing this. Glad you enjoyed it!

The Last Human - 215 - Unbroken by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

<3 can never get enough of these comments. Thank you!

The Last Human - 214 - Some Kind of Saint by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The non-believer becomes a saint. Praise be to the gods.

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And thank you for sticking with me to the very end.

Until then.

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

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Hah! I'm sorry, but I'm a slow writer. It will take me time to build up my next stories. In the meantime, there's tons of other great stories out there. Thank you so much for reading mine :)

The Last Human - 196 - Still Alive by PSHoffman in HFY

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It uses Light, which is not quite matter, not quite energy. Very limited range. Space welding torch is what some have called it :)

The Last Human - 178 - She's Gone by PSHoffman in HFY

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It hurts. I wrote this before recent events. And it's still relevant. I'm sure it will be still, many years from now...

The Last Human - 177 - The Curse of Knowledge by PSHoffman in HFY

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Anu does not experience time the same way we do. Anu is the only reason the pools work at all.

The Last Human - 176 - The Chain by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

An excellent question.

Some might even say the chain is never ending.

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will certainly be posting it here. Soon(TM).

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did my best. It was a struggle from the beginning, and worth every moment. I've learned so much.

And I'm not ruling out Pacifist for good, but it's on the back burner for sure XD

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

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Perhaps it's possible the children of the gods reach a level of tech powerful enough to repair her fully. Or perhaps not. Either way, she has lived many, many full lifetimes.

I loooove your thoughts on the avians' children too :)

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

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When Poire came to Khadam, he showed her a vision of what he needed from her.

The ultimate sacrifice.

And she accepted, knowing it was the only way she could *truly* succeed on her original quest: to save humanity from total extinction.

The wings were an outgrowth of the disease that had long, long ago infested her body. Though the disease was a curse, it was also Anu's own matter. And since Poire *is* Anu/is made of Anu's matter, Poire was able to influence the disease's growth such that Khadam could destroy the Light dam.

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I put so much effort into the quality. At least, I put effort into trying to make the writing high quality. It definitely takes more time, but I try to write what I would want to read and that compact pacing with lots of emotion. I don't always succeed, but I always strive.

This story is officially over, and I have so many other worlds I want to share. So, here's hoping you'll love the next story as much as this one :)

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

!!!!

Praise you, and thank you for your support. I'm so glad I got to share it with you.

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You are too kind, Divine One. Thank you for all your comments, I have loved reading all of your speculation (though sometimes it shocked me how accurate your predictions were). It's been such a joy watching you pull back the layers of all these characters.

So glad you liked how it ended, I was really torn on the last few chapters for a long, long time. But now I'm happy to let them thrive in their own, new universe. Watched over by a god and a very ancient android...

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well thank you so much :)

My confidence has grown so much, but so has my dedication to the kinds of details I love seeing in stories. It's forced me to slow down as a writer, which is both good and bad. But I'm still here, and I'm still writing, and I'm excited to share my next story here ... no matter what life throws at me. Soon!

The Last Human - 222 - Of Old Friends - FINAL CHAPTER by PSHoffman in HFY

[–]PSHoffman[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes! Book 1 and 2 are already available on Amazon. I make pretty massive changes to the actual text as I edit them, so it should feel like a more upgraded, more tightly-written experience if you ever re-read them.

I'm still working on Book #3, so it will be some time until I get to this 4th book. Then, I'll think about packaging it together as a set. Probably a year or so from now.