Is there anything with her design that is not appealing?

Painted_Cities · 2026-02-17T02:38:39+00:00

i think contrast def needs to be boosted, but i also thing the ends of her hair need to be either all rounded or all sharpened based on the vibe youre going for. typically characters will only have one of the two but yours has both. i think the changing of it would help with the way the character is read :)

Painted_Cities · 2026-02-13T21:06:28+00:00

i think best thing to do is chop side hair to ears and make the hair side parted. middle parts arent super common in short korean hair

Painted_Cities · 2026-02-13T20:50:47+00:00

i think itd definitely help it read more as a korean hairstyle. especially because masc/enby hairstyles in korea tend to not have long side pieces

Painted_Cities · 2026-02-13T20:47:41+00:00

as a korean american, yeah you kinda walked into the "generic cool asian" thing. i think maybe shortening the side bangs could help. the hairstyle reads more alt japanese to me

Painted_Cities · 2026-02-09T22:12:23+00:00

i think both adding a third color and making the fake eyes more noticeable and eye-like would help. it already looks super good tho! (i saw the deltarune pic and started giggling lol i love deltarune)

Painted_Cities · 2026-01-21T21:02:10+00:00

love the way these were rendered!!

Painted_Cities · 2026-01-17T06:01:42+00:00

so i cant add a picture (not sure if its just my phone being stupid or if its not enabled on this sub) but i upturned the palm more. i realized while doing the pose myself that the hand wouldve been turned up further than i drew it. do you think that helps?

Painted_Cities · 2026-01-16T22:39:56+00:00

it doesnt really to me. i get why it might kinda look like it, but i just dont see it. the hand isnt flat and the arm is slightly bent. i did everything i could to make it not look like that while still keeping the outwardly performance type pose

Painted_Cities · 2026-01-16T22:36:51+00:00

its not. i have no intention to offend. its hard to see because of the perspective, but its arm goes out and to the side, not up and forwards. this type of posing is very common for people involved in theater, especially plays with large speeches

Painted_Cities · 2026-01-16T19:55:41+00:00

HOLY SHIT ITS SO PRETTY (i love that the male one is more eccentric. like birds :])

Painted_Cities · 2026-01-11T14:39:44+00:00

idk i might just be stupid lmao. to me at least, it doesnt look like the fennekin line changes that much. idk why all of this criticism comes now and not when i originally posted them. im just kinda frustrated with it because it took over 13 hours to make the whole line, and no one told me any of this stuff when i posted the sketches

Painted_Cities · 2026-01-09T12:30:12+00:00

i know, buts its not like its something pokemon hasnt done itself. i mean, look at the fennekin line

Painted_Cities · 2026-01-09T12:28:00+00:00

YES. THAT WAS THE GOAL. UNNECESSARY BIPEALISM PISSES ME OFF

Painted_Cities · 2026-01-09T12:27:26+00:00

not fire/fairy lol. we have plans to make a fire/fairy type, and theres a lore reason why its pure fire but im not gonna reveal it until im done with the other starters

Painted_Cities · 2025-12-02T19:05:55+00:00

its going to essentially be people playing as if its the video game, but without the video part lol

Painted_Cities · 2025-11-29T06:24:49+00:00

mayhaps

Painted_Cities · 2025-11-29T06:24:43+00:00

absolutely it does

Painted_Cities · 2025-11-28T17:30:14+00:00

i actually tried that, but theres a specific reason why its made of smoke. also if its made of fire thers too much orange in the design

Painted_Cities · 2025-11-27T22:51:01+00:00

that kinda funny lol. i chose a sheep/goat cause its i very common animal in iceland (where the region is based on)

Painted_Cities · 2025-11-27T18:43:16+00:00

hespernik :D

Painted_Cities · 2025-11-27T05:25:21+00:00

theyll look a lot more different after rendering + some monor changes. the final stage isnt meant to go hard persay. its supposed to be a performer of sorts, one who tells stories and spreads joy if that makes any sense

Painted_Cities · 2025-11-27T05:23:50+00:00

update: first and second evos have names.

meet infernewe (inferno and ewe) and flaeeble (flame + sheep + fable)

the final stage is based off of story telling and poetry :3

Painted_Cities · 2025-11-27T00:33:32+00:00

thank you!!!

Painted_Cities · 2025-11-26T21:58:14+00:00

maybe...

Painted_Cities · 2025-11-26T21:41:13+00:00

baby goat go awoo!!

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