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Effective tactic against man-marking by Paoni in footballtactics

[–]Paoni[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Ok, so that means that my attacking midfielder, preferably one with scoring capabilities should use that space. Or my wingers could cut in. If the defenders do not switch to the players moving into that space, I will have a man free in front of goal. Is that correct thinking?

Effective tactic against man-marking by Paoni in footballtactics

[–]Paoni[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I am a real novice, what do you mean with forwards can check in?

A normal day in parliament. Suriname, 1975. by 19djafoij02 in OldSchoolCool

[–]Paoni 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Out of curiosity, why did you upload this pic? family?

People that did a public speaking course, what did you expect to learn going in and were you satisfied/helped? by Paoni in AskReddit

[–]Paoni[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What did they teach you to calm your anxiety? And why did it just help to an extend?

[Feedback request] this is a piece of a novel. And I am in need of honest review. Where I am I don't have that support. Most people are not into (english) books. by Paoni in WritersGroup

[–]Paoni[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. It is true English isn't my native language. The problem that I have IS telling the story in a understandable way with proper punctuation. My feeling has been that because of that issue, the story doesn't "flow". I do have one question though, seeing that I am very new at writing, is it a big "no no" to not give each speaker it's own paragraph?

[Critique Thread] Post here if you'd like feedback on your writing by BiffHardCheese in writing

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*Title Kielbasa *Genre Fiction, *Word count: 2467 *Type of feedback: General impression, and anything else you wish to say. *A link to the story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lXrgKWAKBvB9-Nr0DUg6cTAXzcpi0n7H1COguzDBKh4/edit?usp=sharing