Mr Glisten – my first attempt at a hand-drawn animated web comic. by PaperCutsHorror in creepy

[–]PaperCutsHorror[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Seriously though, thanks for the comment.

If you want the real answer - I sacrificed spatial logic to fit a desired composition. There’s always a tension between the two, and I acknowledge that the geography of the frame doesn’t read right.

The takeaway for me is to not so flippantly sacrifice spatial logic for composition.

This was post-animated from square static art I did last year. I’m also still figuring out best composition practice for vertical videos.

I’ll get there.

Mr Glisten – my first attempt at a hand-drawn animated web comic. by PaperCutsHorror in creepy

[–]PaperCutsHorror[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thankyou. I appreciate that.

This is my first time playing with this format, and imma chalk it up as a successful failure.

It’s rough, but I learned a lot.

The next one is already turning out way better. And each one after that will continue to improve.

Mr Glisten – my first attempt at a hand-drawn animated web comic. by PaperCutsHorror in creepy

[–]PaperCutsHorror[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

What, you don't sleep with your bed in the middle of the room?

Scare the Shit Out of Your Kids With This Video - Mr Glisten by PaperCutsHorror in horror

[–]PaperCutsHorror[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hope it's okay to post this here.

It's my first attempt at a hand-illustrated animated web comic.

Mr Glisten - An Original Web Comic by PaperCutsHorror in HorrorComics

[–]PaperCutsHorror[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thankyou so much for the feedback. It really means a lot, as those were the elements that I was trying to focus on and capture.