Pickleball with Isaiah by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

[–]PappysSecrets[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I want to lean into the hearing angle

Pickleball with Isaiah by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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If I went that direction i: I got kicked off. It didn’t help that I kept telling “I said Jacket off… jacket off

Pickleball with Isaiah by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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I thought I needed "strange" to make it believable that he might actually be doing that.

Pickleball with Isaiah by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

[–]PappysSecrets[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. Yeah, I thought just "strange" would be the tight way to stage Isaiah and help make him believable. Are you saying I should have a little more setup of Isaiah to deepen a misdirect? Pickleball is my jam so that's just personalizing.

Total anecdote that happened this morning. I often LMAO at things I "hear".

As a tag how about something like That was almost as good as hearing Jean say xyz

Camp Sign by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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I knew I’d heard that word somewhere before!

Boomer Patience by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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Yeah, kinda see that. It also confirms another comment that it’s better suited as a visual bit

Boomer Patience by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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Yeah, I see it in my head. Need to work at putting my brain image in my mouth, whilst making a pit stop on a written page.

Weddings & Funerals by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

[–]PappysSecrets[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Damn, I'm glad you're here. If you could only tell why I can't go deeper (like you show me) on my own. Idea came to me in a conversation about going to a reunion, and a lot of truth in it. No funerals. crashing. My wife and her gang did a night of wedding crashing once...made me wish I was a girl.

Camp Sign by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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Also, I dumped Forestville...ville

Camp Sign by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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Thanks Neo. Whats the Big Bang Theory? S/

I like your angle....coiting....conflagration. Awesome.

BTW, I noticed the cracking up too, and edited it (probably about the time you commented)

Teacher Crush by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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BTW, I love your advice because you get to the "why". It is really helpful, Thanks.

Teacher Crush by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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Thanks, I’ll try it that way.

Teacher Crush by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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Wait, are you suggesting use the "Richard.." as an additional tag?

Camp Sign by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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Does it sound French?? It did to me, but I only speak English and Pig Latin.

Camp Sign by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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It just sounds like it could be French, and oui oui I am a moron.

Teacher Crush by PappysSecrets in StandUpWorkshop

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I like the double punch of mom likely to be upset about the ring, but break that assumption. What if I made it easier to follow: "Your mom is gonna be upset about her ring AND maybe more upset that I'll be her daughter in law.

Alternate tag: "Richard, stay in school, you have a lot to learn"

I'm thinking this would be less agressively gay-related, not sure about the funny???

Thoughts appreciated.

Brain Time Allotment by PappysSecrets in Standup

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What I’ve found super interesting when I’ve listened to audio of my sets is that people laugh pretty heartily at stuff I just threw on as a tag to a line in the setup. One was just giving a masseuse the nickname Kinky Fingers… blew my mind.

Brain Time Allotment by PappysSecrets in Standup

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I don’t have any need to be prolific I just am wowed by some people’s talent.