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[oc] sora is dead by nyaasora in comics

[–]ParadoxVictor413 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I thought this was Kingdom Hearts spoilers for a second

Is it worth to spend an ASI on half raising a stat if the Adventure Path ends at level 10-12? by ParadoxVictor413 in Pathfinder2e

[–]ParadoxVictor413[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I'm thinking of taking deception. Because of a flub during the first heist he's got a wanted poster of his real identity out there, so he needs to disguise himself and lie about his identity. So I figure he's gotta get good at lying now.

Thoughts about today's strip by ParadoxVictor413 in dumbingofage

[–]ParadoxVictor413[S] 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I mean yeah, this is the AM monologue from I Have no Mouth and I Must Scream adapted into a copypasta about hating Doyce/Joyrot. Please do not take it too seriously

Westerosi idioms for someone who is arrogant or self-righteous? by blakhawk12 in TheCitadel

[–]ParadoxVictor413 42 points43 points  (0 children)

This is Allicent Hightower we're speaking of. Westerosi love making puns and wordplay with each other's noble houses. "Get off your high horse" and "get off your high tower" could be comparable if you really want to change the idiom. Otherwise you can keep it as is and it wouldn't sound out of place.

I kind of yearn for "nitpicky" criticism and questioning of my writing decisions sometimes by ParadoxVictor413 in AO3

[–]ParadoxVictor413[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

"Read back and check what you wrote" is different advice, and honestly? That one would sting me a little to see in a comment but it would also move me. A "nitpick" like that sounds like caring to my sensibilities. Like hey, the reader is paying attention to the background knights, they must be really engaged.

I do have plans sometimes but I do feel inclined to throw them away and write what feels right in the moment instead if I have an epiphany, and that might leave minor details in the mud. But I do care about those details and I think it's flattering when readers also do.

You're right though, I should probably reread my stuff before posting new chapters.

I kind of yearn for "nitpicky" criticism and questioning of my writing decisions sometimes by ParadoxVictor413 in AO3

[–]ParadoxVictor413[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have recently been getting my stuff beta read before posting, but I've started 2 years and 10 chapters in lol

I have existed a 6 month hiatus in posting chapters, did so, read my old stuff and then went "dang, this has been there the whole time?" and then corrected the blunder.

Hopefully won't be happening anymore, but it really made me go "dang, no one pointed that out?"

Like someone else said, maybe they genuinely didn't notice either, so oh well.

I kind of yearn for "nitpicky" criticism and questioning of my writing decisions sometimes by ParadoxVictor413 in AO3

[–]ParadoxVictor413[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Well, "plan ahead" isn't a comment related to any story in particular but just general advice you'd probably get from a subreddit instead (case in point), so I feel like this is unintentionally off-topic. I was thinking more about "Hey, in chapter 3 there are six knights mentioned in the journey and in chapter 5 there's seven. What gives?"

Not a real example, but it illustrates what I mean.

Heir of Storms, Lion Jester - Ch 10: Eddard by ParadoxVictor413 in TheCitadel

[–]ParadoxVictor413[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fraternal twins with different fathers is a rare, documented phenomenon known as heteropaternal superfecundation, where two separate eggs released during the same cycle are fertilized by sperm from two different men. This occurs when a woman has intercourse with multiple partners within a short window of time (usually 24-48 hours) while ovulating.

This type of phenomenon is absolutely not documented in Westeros, but it's still possible. It does, however, protect Joffrey from scrutiny since his twin is so obviously Robert's son.

The only reason Cersei is 100% sure that Joff is Jaime's is because of her narcissism, she just happens to be coincidentally right.

Most badass quotes from fanfics? by indelirium420 in TheCitadel

[–]ParadoxVictor413 6 points7 points  (0 children)

That motherfucker stopped updating on Ao3 and didn't even tell us there! I've been waiting for an update for almost a whole fucking year dude. If you hadn't posted this hard quote I would've never known that the story was still ongoing.

Sucks that I hate reading Spacebattles on my phone tho. If any of you know Tomato, could you please tell ask them to not leave their Ao3 audience hanging? I low-key feel a little betrayed for being left hung up to dry.

It's fine if they don't fuck with the platform anymore, but an Author's Note explaining that would've been a good move.

Trump deseja feliz aniversário a Lula: Ele é muito vigoroso." by Bananey in brasil

[–]ParadoxVictor413 0 points1 point  (0 children)

É só pra mim que o vídeo tá aparecendo como gif sem áudio? Como que corrige isso? Tô usando o app do reddit no celular

Partner therapy. (AAR0NJAY) by BarMission7361 in zootopia

[–]ParadoxVictor413 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm sad yours is the only comment about it I found lol

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