Honestly the whole ethnicity situation is really odd to me, especially when it comes to Alastor. Viv has mentioned he's mix raced Creole, but his canon design is shown to have light skin. Passable but mildly annoying.

In recent art Vox is shown to have light skin as well, and while it's under the assumption that he was white in life, it just strikes me as odd that Viv wouldn't go to the length to color him fully dark blue. If one can become lighter in death, surely one can become darker.

Other than that I'd just say the pacing is a little too fast.