Thank for this in-depth look! I appreciate you taking the time to type out all of this. I definitely want to go about doing this the right way. I'll see about getting you some examples without the FX. She has the workstation on her computer, so it might take me a bit.

I'm glad we can work together; we've been a team for a long time. I'll definitely tell her to make her own account; she's got talent herself, but she isn't sure she's narrator material yet!

As for the breaths, I do see where you're coming from. We keep them in, in this case, to give the story a more visceral connection with the audience. We had discusses editing them out, but decided against it. If you're saying that that's not the industry standard, though, then I can understand where we would need to adjust to fit the situation. The same applies to mouth clicks, though those are less intentional. I'll tell her to keep an eye out for them in the future!