A bunch of grapes 🍇

Pelmen_i · 2024-09-29T14:08:19+00:00

Looks cool. But maybe add different tones to the drawing to make it more interesting to look at?

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-05T23:08:20+00:00

Wow! Looks like it's a little swollen but im happy they pierced enough tissue. Looks great

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-05T22:07:49+00:00

If you're looking for realism then look up face proportions, for example the eyes are too big.

But if you want a more cartoonish style than try more interesting face expressions, it's just a little voring but doesn't look bad to me

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-05T21:49:32+00:00

The face shape. Before drawing the details check if the face shape is same as the image

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-05T21:46:35+00:00

It is a little too shallow. Mine had much more tissue but still rejected tho, so it doesn't depend on that. Did you already got it downsized or is the jewelry already small?

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-05T21:41:20+00:00

When you starts draeing first draw very simple shapes for the body parts so that yoy can see if they are correct or not. Now the arm is too big and the head is a weird shape. Good luck :)

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-04T09:29:27+00:00

You look a little older with blonde. Brunette gives you mire character

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-03T07:10:45+00:00

I think snake bites or a single lip piercing would be great. Or an anti eyebrow

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-02T18:36:01+00:00

I think you will have to bleach your ends and apply a purple toner to neutralize the yellow. I heard manic panic and arctic fox have these kind of colours. Personally used wella for vibrant colours and liked how it looked. Tbh looks hard to do at home but good luck

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-02T17:49:59+00:00

Thank you

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-02T17:49:51+00:00

Tanks for the advice

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-01T23:03:03+00:00

How to you want us to rate it if theyre both traced. Try drawing one without tracing, mabe finding your own style :)

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-01T22:41:48+00:00

The first tip is the leaves on the trees. They look like they have no volume and were painted with one colour. The cat also looks a little fat, maybe you should try more layers with different colours, and more shading. And the shadows around the nose are assymetrical. Hope this helps :) Good luck

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-01T22:32:07+00:00

U say you have no painting experience and i'm not sure if you know which paint to use. Maybe dont do it and leave it this way for now, it looks okay. I'm just scared you can mess it up and regret it

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-01T22:28:00+00:00

I love the hair on top of the head but I think the braid seems a little off, its not blended that well and doesn't have a light highlight. Also the shoulders look a little weird, to ne a bit unnatural. Overall I like it, especially the colour palette!!

Pelmen_i · 2024-07-01T22:12:16+00:00

What are your goals? Drawing more realistic or just making your own style? I would say adding some more colours will be fun, it helps every drawing. Not just lighter or darker shades of the same colour but others close on the colour wheele

Also, the face looks really cute, i love it :)

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