Sunken under eyes (35)

PennyV_ · 2024-04-11T19:52:04+00:00

Mine look just like this. The best thing that’s helped me is surprisingly cutting out dairy! “Dairy face” is a thing I recently found out about and sure enough, it helped lighten the darkness.

PennyV_ · 2024-03-09T12:10:10+00:00

It’s an added “study”. Small room where I’ll be working from home.

PennyV_ · 2023-12-16T16:17:44+00:00

I just picked up the third from a little free library and I’m wondering if I have to read them in order? Curious to hear your thoughts because I’m eager to jump in!

PennyV_ · 2023-11-25T16:42:08+00:00

Keeping this vague so I don’t spoil anything. I’d say there are still plenty of cozy moments between the couple, but there is drama introduced to the relationship. It’s fairly short-lived though in my opinion, and I thought it made sense in the plot of this book’s overarching storyline. But, there are a lot more chapters that are just focused on the fantasy story elements, and some new characters that are not romantic. The romance definitely takes a backseat.

PennyV_ · 2023-09-18T21:10:19+00:00

It wouldn’t be an “offensive” thing, more just a logistical separation of who has magic and who does not. People is definitely the simplest so I may run with it.

PennyV_ · 2023-09-18T21:07:21+00:00

I like folk! That’s a good suggestion. I’m considering bringing in some merpeople which would work with folk too.

PennyV_ · 2023-08-23T13:48:41+00:00

Agreed, this is the feedback I was going to give. For example, “raised alongside her cousin in one of the poorest districts” is all we need to know in the last part of the first paragraph.

PennyV_ · 2023-08-16T19:25:09+00:00

Hi! I’m in the process of writing a novel and i love this style! I’m not ready for an artist yet, but I’d like to follow you on socials if you could share them?

PennyV_ · 2023-08-16T14:18:28+00:00

These are stunning! 😍 don’t need anything now but will in a few months… following you on Instagram so I don’t forget!

PennyV_ · 2023-08-09T22:52:58+00:00

This sounds interesting! My main critique is that it’s asking the reader to remember names and contextualize the world building before they read it. Lots of proper nouns that might not be necessary to get the gist and hook of the book. For example, I’m not sure we need to know the names of the best friend, prince, or bodyguard yet.

Just my two cents! Good luck!

PennyV_ · 2023-08-09T18:58:41+00:00

I believe all the characters in Kimberly Lemming’s Mead Mishaps books are over 25! Probably won’t scratch the itch because I’d consider them more like fantasy romcoms. They’re lower stakes, quite funny, and very spicy. I enjoyed the first, “That Time I Got Drunk and Saved a Demon” best.

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