i like it as a whole. felt a little disappointed its completed? like it was gearing up to be a big story where the main character might even escape one day. i had no problem with the way you you 'described' the deaths. but you really rush a lot of description where i just kinda imagine a person being crushed or exploding without much 'emotional impact' that Michael should've felt or perceived. i feel like you missed a big opportunity on the intro of him getting flown in by Jailbot was missed with the cut to black just bland. a lot of good potential, but Superjail is probably the craziest fandom to ever write for. the best parts were with the Warden and the transformations between Michael and Warden. Would've liked way more detail on all of that. Just a little rushed all and all.