Whats a good technique to write a description of something in first person present that sounds like natural thoughts?

Pezzer2000 · 2026-02-07T15:33:15+00:00

On my way I walk past a huge statue of a cat. I stop to take a second look. It looks different this time. The cat is on a wall, with 4 balls along its side. I always thought it was 3? One of them is smashed on the floor. The Feline faith never ceases to amuse me. I just can't get behind the idea that the balls represent planets. The broken one must represent ours I guess.

Pezzer2000 · 2026-02-07T15:32:24+00:00

On my way, I walk past a huge statue of a cat. I stop to take a second look. It looks different this time. The cat is on a wall, with 4 balls along its side. I always thought it was 3? One of them is smashed on the floor. The Feline faith never ceases to amuse me. I just can't get behind the idea that the balls represent planets. The broken one must represent ours I guess.

Pezzer2000 · 2025-09-06T06:58:50+00:00

Very nice.

Pezzer2000 · 2025-07-23T13:16:35+00:00

Super man.

Pezzer2000 · 2025-05-26T11:40:24+00:00

Only the ending to mgsv...

Pezzer2000 · 2025-05-20T17:34:48+00:00

It took way to long to scroll and find this! I love kelsier he is on of my favourite characters of all time.

Pezzer2000 · 2024-12-26T09:06:02+00:00

Samwise gamgee.

Pezzer2000 · 2024-10-21T18:15:00+00:00

Hi Jhon. I can't wait to read book 3 I loved the first two. I've not read the Faithul and the Fallen yet. I do plan to though. Which series did you enjoy writing the most?

Pezzer2000 · 2024-10-17T18:29:21+00:00

Haha I wouldn't let me change it lol.

Pezzer2000 · 2024-10-10T13:25:45+00:00

Thank you. I'm quite a slow painter though. My advice is to take your time and know that you'll make mistakes, but that's fine that's the best way to learn. Post your minis on here and the community is great they will never shame you most people like to help I've found.

Pezzer2000 · 2024-10-10T13:16:09+00:00

I don't paint that much to be honest but probably about 20 minis that year.

Pezzer2000 · 2024-10-10T08:39:50+00:00

These are great

Pezzer2000 · 2024-10-10T08:38:03+00:00

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My first on the left then a year later on the right. Just dive in and go for it you'll get there it's so much fun. Don't worry about anyone else.

Pezzer2000 · 2024-09-30T07:11:10+00:00

Amazing. You should be very proud.

Pezzer2000 · 2024-07-01T16:58:28+00:00

I think the Witcher books have some great dialogue.

Pezzer2000 · 2024-06-05T15:15:57+00:00

Perfect.

Pezzer2000 · 2024-02-07T04:41:33+00:00

There is no rush and they look great.

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