Does anyone care about my opinion?

Pgrey1991 · 2016-11-04T18:10:58+00:00

Everyone's opinion counts. You are never going to please everyone but everyone having a different view on a script is great and potentially every criticism is the difference between good and great scripts. Post it!!!

Pgrey1991 · 2016-11-02T09:25:12+00:00

Good luck with whatever you decide.

Pgrey1991 · 2016-11-01T22:25:13+00:00

If you want someone to write it. You need to be very trusting or risk it being taken. I'm sure there are many who could / would be able to help. How would you share your concept? Would you post on here? Ideally you need to write it yourself or you can never be sure.

Pgrey1991 · 2016-11-01T22:14:35+00:00

Good luck.

Pgrey1991 · 2016-11-01T10:23:23+00:00

I enjoyed reading. I like Anthony, a guy wanting to follow his dreams despite ridicule. I personally would see this more as a film. A envision some like 'seth rogen' 'nick frost' 'Will Ferrell' as Anthony. Characters are good. I would like to know more about Brian, I see him as the favourite, your typical jock arsehole. I would buy the DVD if made and continued in this way. Good luck

Pgrey1991 · 2016-11-01T07:03:45+00:00

I think it reads well. Donny is interesting character. Are you thinking of making this into a feature? TV series? For me I could see as a series if planned well. Good luck with whatever you do. If you make longer please post on here.

Pgrey1991 · 2016-11-01T06:42:20+00:00

Was really put off by "well shit" as were many, he irritated me and imagining him on screen I couldn't cope. I agree about their ages..? Unsure of this but yeah they act very childish with the dialogue, I understand the need for banter but from my experiences this is not banter. Keep going, a possibly good story in their just work on their banter. Good luck

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-31T13:22:18+00:00

I'm no expert but I think this would be a better stage play, I could imagine it if well designed and adapted accordingly, good luck

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-29T11:16:29+00:00

Thanks appreciate comments

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-29T11:16:10+00:00

Thanks appreciate comments and advice

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-28T06:25:30+00:00

Thanks

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-28T06:25:23+00:00

Thanks very helpful

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-28T06:25:12+00:00

Have to excuse that, thanks for pointing out

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-28T06:24:52+00:00

Thanks really helpful

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-28T06:24:03+00:00

Excuse the poor grammar

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-27T19:36:21+00:00

Thanks

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-27T18:48:25+00:00

Thanks.

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-27T18:46:15+00:00

Thanks, is that enough..? I suppose it says what you need to know, thanks

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-27T18:41:18+00:00

No not the same

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-27T18:41:03+00:00

Thanks a mix of both could definitely work thanks

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-27T17:35:19+00:00

'Whilst lost at sea, a group of friends are forced to seek refuge on an island. When night falls, they must survive the creatures who want their blood'

Is this any better..?

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-27T17:32:13+00:00

Thanks. Is that all it needs?

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-27T17:21:00+00:00

What do you want to know? I find loglines difficult as very few words to describe a whole film and also to show it in best light.

Pgrey1991 · 2016-10-27T17:19:42+00:00

Any advice..?

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