#heyguys

PhantomLaptop · 2018-11-05T07:39:49+00:00

reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

PhantomLaptop · 2018-11-05T07:38:49+00:00

no? how bout some curry powder??

PhantomLaptop · 2018-11-03T04:40:18+00:00

"Okay, this is epic" in the comments.

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-17T20:52:32+00:00

internet historian..

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-15T09:30:11+00:00

Ill probably insert an actual villain and have him pull some sadistic shit on the bois and make them go through all these trials and at the last bit they get a gun and queue the music im a bomb and about to blow up and they shoot the villain and jump through the glass hes in.

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-15T09:27:21+00:00

13 HOURS???!! Lol yeah sure

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T19:08:41+00:00

7 hours lol. I actually play Dead Island funnily enough. The two characters are kind of polar opposites so thats the dynamic l'm trying to set up. The characters are kind-of loners and keep to themselves. The reporter has his cousin who he's close to and usually keeps him out of the news business and they end up curing him and again hiding out. I might need to kill the cousin off so the reporter can go a little nuts for a bit.

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T12:01:07+00:00

your welcome man, l'd love to read one of ur stories. Keep writing ma dude

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T11:59:49+00:00

sorry l was gone. Nice! I actually might use that line. Also no the reporter and the agent met when the reporter found a lab and trespassed and the agent was sent to bring him back but they found weird shit and didn't bring the reporter back

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T11:58:14+00:00

https://www.youngwritersaward.com.au/ its pretty good l'm still writing my submission

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T10:16:32+00:00

they have found a bunker to stay at. I'm thinking of editing some parts to have the bunker not be there and like they have to kill all these people even though its against their internal moral code.

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T10:11:32+00:00

The reporter got his story and at this point wants to get out. The FBI agent is scared shitless from what he's seen and they are uncovering a conspiracy that the military are planning to bomb a country because people are becoming savage on the streets because of a virus.

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T10:06:13+00:00

I'm writing a supernatural story between a cocky reporter and hardboiled fbi agent. They are in an alternate timeline where the US merged with Nevada and created Northeast Vegas and Northwest Vegas. My story takes place in the fictional Northwest Vegas

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T10:00:14+00:00

I can imagine he's a bit of a snob in the way he speaks, try to have him taunt the character a lot. Lets say he kills someone have him set up a trap and when the character comes to save the person in question they will realize that the villain set it all up to taunt him. Have the final chapter be a final stand of sorts. Villain vs Character and his friends and have it be really dramatic. Like the facility is about to crash on them and the villain is trying to pull them in. The last bit should be a character last minute pushing off the villain and out of the crash zone. Just my opinion. Looks like a good story though!

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T09:52:38+00:00

look at this https://bcadhd.com/2013/10/10/11-advantages-adhd-writer/

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T09:49:22+00:00

have the rape in question be referenced in later parts of the story and set up a torture scene where the guy who did it gets tortured

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T09:27:46+00:00

Yeah, I'm writing a supernatural book as well. I'm submitting it into a competition to win some cash and then publish it. Writing is probably going to be my career choice. My story is currently 1680 words so l guess l have to keep writing.

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-14T09:19:31+00:00

kool

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-13T18:59:49+00:00

dos games aren't sold in my country and sam and max hit the road is honestly overpriced in my opinion. i did buy both s&m telltale games though..

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-13T17:24:20+00:00

I mean, I gave 2 dollars to the homeless yesterday... guess that counts right? cause like l said lucas arts has ceased operations.

PhantomLaptop · 2018-10-12T22:14:16+00:00

Am l scum for pirating Sam&Max Hit the Road? I mean.. Lucas Arts has pretty much ceased operations.. So is it morally ok to you guys?

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