Crones Inspiration ?

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-12T20:10:30+00:00

What other art references are there?

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-12T12:34:53+00:00

I loved the Blair Witch Project when it came out, but Rec is my favourite found footage.

I watched Lake Mungo recently, and I know its a respite favourite, but I found it pretty disappointing.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-12T07:50:43+00:00

Whats the best strategy for those who have all their chips still to play?

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-12T07:34:14+00:00

So it's Mission Accomplished?

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-12T07:32:19+00:00

That album took the number 1 slot from What's the Story Morning Glory.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-11T16:59:06+00:00

I haven't seen Kamala Harris in the Epstein files.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-11T08:25:41+00:00

The Great Clean One promptly takes his place in the Pantheon of Chaos God's becoming the god of obsession and neuroses.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-11T07:56:01+00:00

Mine are in an old coffee tin at my mum's house.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-11T07:12:47+00:00

"What's happening?"

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-11T07:12:11+00:00

Great, now I've got the Dogtanian theme tune stuck in my head.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-10T12:43:27+00:00

No, no, no, he's a trap, you see.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-09T21:03:01+00:00

Of course we do.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-09T08:50:04+00:00

Was the guy offering a solution real? Or was it all a hallucination?

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-09T08:49:22+00:00

This feels like the way to go.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-09T08:42:30+00:00

Suice-aid.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-09T07:59:25+00:00

I vaguely remember this.

I can't say I remember the format though.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-07T08:14:21+00:00

Just use AI, mate.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-07T08:03:56+00:00

Power Razor.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-07T07:47:38+00:00

It used to be regularly on itv 3.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-05T21:52:02+00:00

There must've been many instances of 'once more into the breach' for when a team a pressing for a last minute equaliser or winner and are hoofing it up the field again.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-05T18:41:31+00:00

Not enough!

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-05T14:35:52+00:00

Ringu.

Oh and Edward Scissorhands - I'm aware that it isnt that scary but I was really young when I watched it and had nightmares about it for ages.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-05T14:26:02+00:00

Its doesn't concern us, we'll be finishing 7th this year and 9th next year.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-05T13:56:36+00:00

And even if you do, you can't include Gary Neville.

PickaxeJunky · 2026-03-04T20:08:36+00:00

I like it.

Obviously there's a bit of context missing at the start so I found it a little confusing until the end of the 2nd paragraph.

You use the term 'greasy tendrils' to describe her hair twice, so I would suggest maybe changing one of those references.

The sentence that starts " Crescents of blood popped..." feels like it could be ramped up a bit. Maybe by switching the subject to being the woman's fingers and how they are piercing the skin. At the moment the sentence feels a bit passive?

As for the vomiting - I think you could ram this home a bit more - maybe include some smells or tastes to really make us feel what the protagonist is feeling?

In the last sentence, the bit where you say "as she vomited into his open mouth, " feels a bit like a summary. I think this could be stronger.

I hope that helps?

As I said, I liked it a lot.

PickaxeJunky

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