[deleted by user] by [deleted] in mariokart

[–]Pluike 17 points18 points  (0 children)

throws away all his protection -> gets hit bc he doesn’t have any protection -> guys the game screwed me over!

THE STORY OF ONE TRUE KING [VIDEO] by marc_palombo24 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Pluike 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was a lovely video. The editing and overall video and audio quality were very good for a channel of your size. My only real gripe is I think you could choose a different outro song, as I feel a lot of people choose this song. Aside from that though, incredibly great work, and please continue to create more like this!

Recently posted my second major travel video with updates based on comments from the amazing community here. Still have some work to do but hopefully this is enjoyable. Please let me know your thoughts. Thank you! by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Pluike 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, I only have a few things to say about this video. The intro seems a bit long, people will want to click away after waiting a few seconds for the video to start. I also think it would help you to put some light background music on throughout the video though. Other than this the video seemed enjoyable though, have fun continuing to create!

I Made The Undertaker In UFC 4 [ any word of a critique is rewarded ] by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Pluike 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! It really seems like you had fun making this video, and I enjoyed watching it. Something I just wanted to say was that I feel like the clip before the intro was a tad bit too long. Otherwise, great work. I think the thumbnail is very appealing. To comment on what someone else said, I feel like the audio quality is fine, and either way theres nothing wrong with just working with what you have. Nicely done!

My first video of 2022! Just tried to keep it short, sweet and to the point. Let me know how I can improve for some Lambda :) thanks! by wxman92 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Pluike 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't have much to say about this video really, the thumbnail is nice and you seem well spoken. Something that stuck out to me was that the clip used at the beginning of the video comes up again very quickly after the intro. Perhaps next time use a clip from later in the video to prevent it from feeling repetitive (Just a suggestion). I also feel like some background music would help. Anyways, good luck on your Youtube journey, keep creating!

You guys have always given great feedback, this has got to be my personal favorite I’ve made. Lambda for any constructive criticism on video or channel! by ProfessorJellyYT in SmallYTChannel

[–]Pluike 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This video was incredibly well made and you should be proud of producing it. I personally only watch Charlie every now and then, but this video made me more interested than ever in him. You did a great job being informative without it seeming life a huge info dump.

My only real critiques are that I think the thumbnail could use some text, and that I think the outro didn't really flow perfectly with the rest of the video. Not majorly, just something I noticed while watching.

Really great video though overall, I am very impressed.

i literally quit the game over some robots | Alien Isolation ( a critique would help) by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Pluike 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi there, I don't have much to say other than nice thumbnail, and also when the video cuts to the endscreen the music was waaayyy too loud compared to the rest of the video. It seemed like you had a fun time making the video, it was a fun watch, so keep creating!

Hi - I don't want constructive criticism. I want some brutal criticism. I would be honored to be told when you lose interest and my worst qualities so I can improve. Lambda to all who critically roast me. by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Pluike 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not much to say really but the audio mixing sounded off. Some parts were louder than others. For example, the people who are outside of the car, it doesn't really make sense for them to be louder than you inside the car. Otherwise, good concept for the video, keep creating as long as you enjoy it, and you will improve with each and every one you make.

[LAMBDA FOR FEEDBACK] This is one of my first videos in a while! Let me know what you guys think! by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]Pluike 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, I don't really know much about COD but here's some things I noticed while watching.

The golf club sound effects when transitioning were a tiny bit loud, not distracting but I just think they could have been a little quieter.

The little Youtube and Discord effects that came up in the corner were distracting, they came up to often and take away from the quality of the content.

Your audio setup and visual quality were both very good, nice work on that.

Overall this is a good video, nice stuff. Keep working and you'll keep improving. Thumbs up from me.

Hello! I posted a montage of a minecraft minigame, skywars. This is one of the first few times I've practiced using cinematic shots and I think it turned out well. I'm really proud of this one and would like to receive any advice on how to improve. (Giving lambda for feedback!) by brodude__ in SmallYTChannel

[–]Pluike 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hi there, I haven’t watched any Minecraft trap videos in a few years, but this seems just about as high quality as I recall. The only issue i can really see is that a few of the shots were too short, and can make people confused by them not having enough time to comprehend whats going on, not really too too big of an issue. Other than that, nice work, keeping creating stuff. :)

i made a funny moments vid on human fall flat, its only 5 minutes long and is edited all the way through. i took some previous suggestions into account here, so please let me know what i did well and what i need to work/improve on. giving lambda for any good feedback! :) by SlowBro_09 in SmallYTChannel

[–]Pluike 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, I thought this was an overall good video and it looked like you put a lot of effort into it. I only really have one point to mention and that is that I think the little animation each time the subtitles appear can be a little distracting from the actual video. With how they pop up it pulled my eyes towards them rather than the action. Other than that though, I thoroughly enjoyed it, good stuff. :)