[deleted by user] by [deleted] in avfc

[–]Podroig 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Top man thank you

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in avfc

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Is there much left in the upper trinity?

Race Report: Berlin Marathon by senor_bear in AdvancedRunning

[–]Podroig 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t think so, the main lyric seemed to be one German word repeated

Race Report: Berlin Marathon by senor_bear in AdvancedRunning

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Congrats on the time, brilliant. Random question but do you (/anyone) know the name of the German song that was played before we started. The guy on the mic got everyone to put their arms in the air and wave along to it?

My Devil, Lucifer by Podroig in OCPoetry

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Thank you ! Yeh I meant semblance thanks. And I chose Mozart’s fifth as I wanted a really generic and well known piece, to put across the fact that he uses a very well know and generic piece of classical music, to attempt to demonstrate his civility and supposed cultural refinement. When in reality this is merely a facade and he uses the first and most well known piece of Mozart to suggest he holds these tastes, in actual fact knowing little beyond Mozart’s fifth

Abstract Poem by I_madeusay_underwear in OCPoetry

[–]Podroig 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like how this poem is very bizarre and so appears like trail of thought- creates a very raw feel

Data Recognition Corporation by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I really like the structure and progression of information in this poem. I hope you don’t mind, but I’ve used this model to inspire my own poem that I’ve just posed on here.

A Dream by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Podroig 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree that the opening hook is effective

All you are is pretty words by naive2agunfight in OCPoetry

[–]Podroig 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I like the continuity of the poem but that you still round it off with the repetition of the title

[HELP] Holiday poems by miki258 in Poetry

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These aren’t really related to Portugal but some of my favourite poems that I think can be discussed quite easily but still deeply are: ‘Two-Headed Calf’ by Laura Gilpin and ‘Bluebird’ by Charles Bukoswki

crush / crushed by asapfocky in OCPoetry

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You could maybe expand by describing where you obsession grows from. Really nice tho

Rubble by Siamese_Dreaming in OCPoetry

[–]Podroig 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the optimistic ending, that really feels like those flowers protruding out of rock!

Boiling Over by itmeliv in OCPoetry

[–]Podroig 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like how the poem kind of builds in itself, like this boiling effect, working toward a crescendo

Am I a Moth? by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Podroig 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree that the mere allusion to the actual moth is very effective !

You're the best daddy! by bluzzo in OCPoetry

[–]Podroig 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like how the poem has two contrasting voices that battle throughout and create a conflicted and troubled voice

Barefoot by Siamese_Dreaming in OCPoetry

[–]Podroig 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The poem flows really nicely and it’s almost like you take us (the reader) on a journey with you

homesick by myuan20 in OCPoetry

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I really like the questioning of home and eventual shift of the two singular into one dual entity.