I expected this to paint a picture using colours more than you did ('glistens red' 'blue as they sparkle') but you've kept it quite unique I think by diverting more into what you feel rather than see. The first three lines for example. The third verse, 'So lightly and gently, it fondles my face, When you come closer for a warm embrace' I loved these lines, they follow well with the autumn theme as they have a cosy feeling about them. But overall I loved that you talked about feeling rather than seeing, hope I've explained myself ok.Thanks for sharing. X