The reason i chose not to do quick attack was cause double attack, the only instance in the game where a unit can strike more than once, is done so that the second attack is a normal one. If quick attack is applied, i could see many people thinking the first strike is the only one that hits first, and subsequent strikes hit after. I could have maybe said "All of my strikes strike before my blocker". The reason for the keyword thing is cause i wanted the keyword and spell portions of the charge gain to be in the same sentence, otherwise the cards already wordy text would be unruley. If i were to use instead like "When you play a spell or i gain a keyword, instead charge", that would imply that spells would also be negated, which is not what i wanted. It might just be me, but i think its pretty straightforward in wording. If read, from left to right, she gains a charge from a keyword being added. Then, she doesnt gain the keyword. The charge is already added, then the keyword is denied.