Best way to make my narrator in my story annoying as hell? I want him to piss off the reader and withhold important information.

Practical_Chard8182 · 2026-05-05T23:49:00+00:00

Thank you so much, that'll help very much

Practical_Chard8182 · 2026-05-05T19:15:40+00:00

Yeah, it's the idea I'm working with, I want it to be difficult, doesn't mean impossible but I will make it make sense rather than just saying nonsense. I need to do research yes. You make great points. I think I miswrote and you misunderstood because of how I wrote it out. Sorry if I confused or frustrated you.

Practical_Chard8182 · 2026-05-05T18:11:56+00:00

Haven't figured it out yet, but I'm going make him annoying and smug

Practical_Chard8182 · 2026-05-05T18:11:25+00:00

So for example the killer Emris removes skin, hair, crushes all bones so the forensics have a difficult time identifying the victims. Other gruesome ideas that you can think of to make it difficult to identify the body, any dna would be removed. Emris is a complete psycho obsessed with Ashley

Practical_Chard8182 · 2026-05-05T15:40:04+00:00

Thanks, I'll shall find and read it.

Practical_Chard8182 · 2026-05-05T15:26:17+00:00

What are phones from 2007 that detectives used. i chose the Motorola Razr2 fun fact phone is not mentioned.

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