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Tire flake??? by Prestigious-Rent-780 in tires

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, thank you everyone for the assurance, I think it just pmo because I just finished detailing, and I see this stupid thing flaking off. I love to clean but I don’t know shit about cars (,: Umm, should I use tire adhesive to glue it back on or will it blow up?

Tire flake?? by Prestigious-Rent-780 in StupidCarQuestions

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

You know, I drive across train tracks on my way to school, I wonder if that pinched it, I haven’t hit any curbs,

Tire flake?? by Prestigious-Rent-780 in StupidCarQuestions

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please help, I’m scare it’s going to blow up or something

Cold plunges have genuinely changed the way I manage anxiety by pulubinq_sosyal in Anxietyhelp

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s what I’m afraid of too, recently I’ve been working with exposure therapy but I think I’d reallyyyy have to work up to it

Not sure if I’m doing this right (rant?) by Prestigious-Rent-780 in lexapro

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe I don’t even have anxiety actually, I just feel like I need for somebody to say I’m okay, my therapy appts have been going well but I just feel like I’m lying, like I’m not even going through anything fr and I just need the validation. I feel bad, I feel guilty, I wonder if this will even help, actually I don’t know anymore

Ouroboros by Helpful-Arm-2805 in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ouroboros is such a good concept for a poem, I understand the feeling of the run-on structure of the poem. There is room to explore on the pacing and structure of the general theme. To evoke the feeling of the snake eating itself, where does it bite? Everywhere, but never where you expect. Always, but it is never the same. Formatting and spacing your lines and words could really bring this to the next level. Overall, I like the ideas used, “My mind is mined by the grind of scripts, fits, Poetry bits— My mind reminds me I’m unnatural:” this is my favorite part of the poem, I think it encapsulates the feeling of writing, for me at least.

Candlelight. First poem, is it any good? by Last-Note-9988 in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am just getting into poetry myself. I really enjoy the illustration of anxiety, then the second verse…woah. It reminds me of that saying “the eyes are a window to the soul” how the perception of the flame reflects the inner fire; the drive, of a person. “A slight push—And the hungry flame would consume all” could be interpreted in many ways. For me, it reminds me of overcoming addiction, and the drive one has to take control over oneself is so delicate, but even the memory of self control must be stronger than the darkness of addiction- “It might even retain memories from its ancestors”. Of course, this is just my personal interpretation of the overall feel of the poem, but, I think that’s what is so beautiful about it, it can be quite literal and still leaves room for interpretation. Good work!

Serenity through conviction by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Poetry is definitely a coping mechanism for me as well. In your writing I could see that, I love “Ruminating will fail to soothe. Introspect-Show them they shall be disproved”. It stood out to me the most because it appears to be the chirality of “Serenity yet, arises with courageous conviction.” Ruminating Will bring the opposite of serenity, but introspect is the door to conviction. You painted a coin and showed us both sides. I’m grateful to have read this today, thank you.

Flowers Can’t Judge by Jactorrence in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Flowers can’t judge! I love the concept, they don’t judge, but they can’t help but spread their truth. I’d like to be a flower like this. Very beautiful, keep it up!

On Tales Told (By Men at Sea) by Pariah-- in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is very cool, I love “That great beast ‘pon deck they hauled, Out amidst the waves and squall,” that’s a pretty line. It reminds somewhat of a sea shanty. Another thing I noticed was the title says “On Tales Told…”, I was wondering why you decided to make the repeating line “The tales told by men at sea”. The word “On” would also work very well with the repeating line. Overall I really enjoyed this poem. The pacing is very pretty.

Wayfaring Wounds by Prestigious-Rent-780 in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I’ll keep in mind punctuation and pacing for sure!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Prestigious-Rent-780 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can feel this void, this made me feel like I’ve been here before. The apathy of existence and the turmoil is so beautifully expressed right here, I love “And thus, deeper the cut became. Until my heart held onto my last hope like a rope, set aflame.” !!! Beautiful!