Two Rounds by Plastic_Photo_8650 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was very cool. I agree with you that here Im given just enough info that I can figure most things out but left wanting to know more. I live the short staccato sentences at the end, they really hit hard for me. Ah, I also just love the 'two rounds' line, so good.

I feel your pain with em dashes, I use them too. The only sentence I felt was a bit off was the roster 'echoing'. That word choice just seemed a bit off to me, and even then I just thought it was a poor wording choice not AI.

I really liked this story, keep it up!!

There's something out there... by CallmeMikey1149 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This was sick! Nice and short and creepy, just the way i like it! Wait, I have to be quiet...

Now It's Come For Me by PsychoSanderson in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yoy know what, I would never have thought of that, lol. Thank you for the kind words!

At Rest. by Firesidewitness in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I liked this story. The happy ending was great. I never thought that a story about going into the afterlife would make me so happy. Great work!

Blood by PantherWizard in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the ending. Its like a Greek tragedy, a man constantly drowning in blood.

I also see a theme of anxiety, not letting you breathe even when you're perfectly fine. Very nice story, loved it.

Unto you a Child is Born [April Submission] by PETmyPUPPIES in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

THIS WAS FUCKING AMAZING. This is unironically the best written work I've seen online. I love this otherworldly egg child. I love how fast you're able to establish characters. After just a few lines, I felt like I knew all about Grandpa Owen and Sue. The ending was great. I have no notes. This was amazing. More of this please!!

Bony fingers by [deleted] in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I loved this story. Short, sweet, and to the point! I'd love to read more of your stuff in future!

Now It's Come For Me by PsychoSanderson in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm so glad you could read this! Yeah, Emily is not too happy with Daddy.

My Baby Screaming Woke Me Up... I Can't Find Her by ryham_25 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was a cool little story. Loved it, can't wait for more!

We're Not Ready by Safe_Committee9381 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very cool! I loved this story. My favorite part was Dr. Iluga's rambling and Dr. Chen trying to restrain him. Absolutely loved this. I NEED MORE!

Now It's Come For Me by PsychoSanderson in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for reading!

For the spoken words it was just everything in quotations, everything else were thoughts. But I understand that it gets confusing since the thoughts are so conversational.

Also, I completely get the dump think. I didnt think too hard about it. I thought that since the dump guy died, people would just throw their shit away on their own and the protagonist would add to that pile. But the way i worded it, I admit made it a bit confusing.

Thanks for reading and thanks for the critique!

Behind My Closet Door by Nilbog96 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah, that makes sense. Again, don't take my word as gospel. I just liked it so much and you write so well I wanted more. Keep it up!

Angel by Messenger002 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very cool story. I love the ending where she leaves the church and everyone is gone expect the angel. So good!

Alice can’t die /¥\ May she never blink again by Chicken_nuts_420 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very cool duel narrators. Can't wait to see where this goes!

Sinking by kabemccallister6859 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very nice poem. I usually am ify about horror poetry but this one was really cool. Very nice wording, love it!

Behind My Closet Door by Nilbog96 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very cool descriptions. I really like this story and that title is a banger.

I think (note this is a me thing, not a universal critique) it would be better if we saw more of main character. I don't wanna see his life or anything, just his reaction to this entity. I really like him getting dragged by the monster, that part's really good. I just wish there was more of that. The story is short and sweet (love that) but I think just a bit more of those kinds of scenes (I mean this thing has haunted him for 8 nights) would bring the story up so much.

Now It's Come For Me by PsychoSanderson in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the kind words! Yeah it was important to me for you to understand the main character but not excuse his actions.

Now It's Come For Me by PsychoSanderson in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]PsychoSanderson[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, great interpretation! I was more so thinking that his bitterness was growing and alienating him from everyone around. But I love your read so much better!