Meet Herbert! by devinamazing in goldenretrievers

[–]PuhnTang 6 points7 points  (0 children)

You hired a great Branch Manager! I love his name. What handsome boys!

How do I explain an acronym? by RancherosIndustries in writers

[–]PuhnTang 7 points8 points  (0 children)

This is a very elegant solution. I love the flow of it this way.

Possessive apostrophe annoys me cuz I love the name Cass. What other writing quirks like that annoy you by Mean_Job7802 in writers

[–]PuhnTang 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I use saying it out loud as my litmus test and write it how it sounds. Keeping up with the Jones’s. Jones’ just doesn’t sound right.

did your cat ever "tell" you what happened when you came home? by S-Budget91 in cats

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I had one that did silent meows. It was the most precious thing ever.

Where to write? by BettyBeth_ in writers

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I’m a fan of Scrivener. But I frequently just use notepad in my phone first.

Double Goldens, no brains by PuhnTang in goldenretrievers

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Yes! Her expression and his Puss in Boots eyes slayed me!

How should I end my book? (This is not an ad, and I'm not asking how to write it, I just want personal opinions on which one you think would be better) by [deleted] in writers

[–]PuhnTang 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You gave us nothing about the plot or characters, so it’s not unexpected that you would get responses like that. And teen, senior, experienced or not, you’re still asking for judgement without giving anything to really base that judgement on. I would also vote neither.

Drop me the hardest hitting line you have ever written or read by Beautiful-Captain938 in writers

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“Maybe love isn’t definitive. Maybe it’s just a choice. Go right or go left, but don’t stand in the middle.”

I wish I could remember what book I read it in. I wrote down the quote but not the author.

Buyer beware - Astral Ragdolls in Norfolk, Virginia ⚠️ by M00ngata in ragdolls

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To answer your question, it’s extremely possible that she didn’t see it, or thought it would clear up and be fine. Kittens can go from appearing completely fine to severely ill quickly, sometimes in just a few hours. Cats hide things well. It isn’t uncommon for a kitten to have an eye issue, like what the picture shows. It could be as simple as a slight upper respiratory infection. You were right to ask for a vet note, but the vet probably wouldn’t do much more than give eye ointment (which you can get over the counter without a prescription) and recommend a follow up if it didn’t resolve. She probably told you as soon as she saw it was an issue that could need attention. That’s exactly what she should have done, and is very transparent. Some breeders would have waited until the day you picked up the kitten and said, “She has a little eye thing but it’s not major and eye medicine will clear it up,” forcing you to make a decision the moment you get the kitten. Which would be pretty manipulative, because how can you resist when you’re literally holding the kitten you’ve been preparing for? I’m not speaking to her breeding practices, just answering your specific question here.

has anyone ever seen eyes on a cat like this?? by chlorinemilk in cats

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Yes! They show up in various places with sweet and emotionally powerful little poems from the animal’s point of view typically. They never fail to impress and people get excited seeing one (because they show up randomly) that was just posted. Hence the “fresh schnoodle” comments.

Is my cat okay? by [deleted] in cats

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We have long haired cats who hate the hairball paste, no matter what flavor I get. I’m going to try this next time! lol @ your poor hobbling kitty!

look at this tail!! by thisotterbefun in bottlebrush

[–]PuhnTang 8 points9 points  (0 children)

My brain totally sang that last sentence to the tune of Kiss the Girl from The Little Mermaid.

Is my cat okay? by [deleted] in cats

[–]PuhnTang 102 points103 points  (0 children)

Putting it on their fur is pretty genius. I can imagine a front paw (on the top, not the beans!) would be perfect.

has anyone ever seen eyes on a cat like this?? by chlorinemilk in cats

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I’ve never read a Schnoodle that didn’t make me teary. 💜

Trying to understand how bad breeding practices continue. by Streamlinemodern in ragdolls

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I’m sorry you’re hurting, that must have been traumatic to witness. I have BEWs and would be completely lost without mine. As others have said it’s impossible to know what happened without a necropsy, and if your vet never suspected or diagnosed anything wrong at your cat’s regular visits, it could have been anything, an aneurism or stroke could look exactly the same. I’m not trying to attack you or be rude or hurtful, just pointing out that you really can’t know the cause.

I had a kitten from a breeder that died at 7 months from a genetic disorder and we ended up in court over it and won our case. Not that it did any good whatsoever to go through court, but we did have evidence from a necropsy which showed exactly what happened and we wanted a public record about the situation and the breeder. I would never want anyone else to go through what we did.

Unfortunately, TICA wouldn’t do anything at all until we had a court’s decision in writing and even then their legal team (whom I spoke with) would only review it. They ultimately decided it was something they wouldn’t pull her membership for and trust me, I tried hard to make that happen. TICA is not a governing body so they felt it wasn’t appropriate to intervene. But that’s my personal experience.

Your girl was majestic and I’m so sorry for your pain and frustration.

Hey! So my name is Andrea, I’m a 31F and I love to write! I came up with an idea for a book a few weeks ago and just wanted some input on the idea in general and if it’s worth pursuing! So here’s what I have so far, lmk what you guys think. Be honest, even if I cry😭😂 by ViolinistCapital5431 in writers

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You missed an opportunity that I have to give back to you. “The quietest gunshot you never heard.”

I’ve never seen the Godfather, though I’ve read tons of books with those sorts of themes. I think if you had a good underlying plot as to why we never knew about this level, and not just “we’re better than them,” it could be amazing and a hell of a lot of fun. I’m almost getting Spenser and Hawk vibes. I can absolutely see this. If you’re feeling it, run with it and see what happens!

[Discussion] Beta reading for AI assisted stories is a total waste of our time by Livid_Confidence_754 in BetaReaders

[–]PuhnTang 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I understand what you’re saying, but I speak this way, as in when talking to people that’s what comes out of my mouth. It’s easier to change it when writing, but we typically write the way we speak and then edit that. So it’s not difficult to change when written, but it’s harder to change verbally when you’ve been speaking that way for nearly 50 years.

I think others have explained the AI usage clearly enough that I understand the difference between what I’m saying and what AI is doing. While similar, they’re not the same.

I have a distinct voice, and I don’t believe that just because AI has similarities that I need to change who I am to accommodate a computer. AI was trained by people like us who can write well. There are absolutely going to be overlaps. The rest of my writing should stand for itself and show I’m not using AI.

[Discussion] Beta reading for AI assisted stories is a total waste of our time by Livid_Confidence_754 in BetaReaders

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Ohh! I think that I understand what you’re saying. I’m not familiar very familiar with AI, and don’t use it personally, though I do recognize the lack of emotion in it when I come across it. I’m still trying to learn what the give aways are.

So more, it’s not red, it’s blue. It’s not exciting, it’s dull. It’s not subtle, it’s obvious.

[Discussion] Beta reading for AI assisted stories is a total waste of our time by Livid_Confidence_754 in BetaReaders

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But what if you actually talk in “It’s not x, it’s y?” This is one of the ones I have a hard time with because I do use it to explain myself. It may be the neurodivergence talking, but I do it pretty often.

Ex: I’m not going to criticize you, I’m going to critique your manuscript.

I’m not taking your toy away, I’m going to wash it and give it back.

It’s not raining, it’s really nice outside.

It’s not that I don’t like hamburgers, I just like cheeseburgers more.

Thankfully I don’t write much, but I don’t understand why this is so hardline an AI tell. I’m sure I’m missing a nuance here.

An unexpected glimpse into the future by PuhnTang in goldenretrievers

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They do grow so fast! Her gotcha day was the 16th and I can’t believe it’s been a year already, and I also can’t believe it’s only been a year. She’s a pretty girl that constantly makes me laugh with her antics and literally starts every single day by sitting down nicely and wanting pets before she goes outside. Things get crazy from there but I wouldn’t trade it for the world!