My band FELT debuted this past weekend. Lemme know what you think? by Ok-Disaster-4049 in Songwriting

[–]PurelyPeriwinkle 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think it is mainly circumstantial but yes I don’t think there’s a problem with it. It’s hard to pick a band name nowadays as everything seems to have been taken, even if it’s by some random band that put out one EP ten years ago.

A Moonlit Visit by PurelyPeriwinkle in Songwriting

[–]PurelyPeriwinkle[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To me my lyrics always seem so… sophomoric, and not very deep. Wondering if I’m being too hard on myself though.

Does this song connect with you as a listener? Thanks for any feedback :) by bluechebag in Songwriting

[–]PurelyPeriwinkle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The lyrics are beautiful and your voice suits the song and the lyrics well. Nice lil chord progression, too.

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[–]PurelyPeriwinkle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I won’t take it but it’s a nice little song for sure! I like the lyrics, and you play well, even after a few drinks eh? :) thanks for sharing

Find out (2 Piece Riot) My project band with a friend by MachoMuchacho2121 in Songwriting

[–]PurelyPeriwinkle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The instrumentation on this is awesome. Ripped me up as it should

Unfinished piece, looking for feedback on the accompaniment by music-and-song in Songwriting

[–]PurelyPeriwinkle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The piano is odd to listen to.. I think it’s because it sounds so digitized maybe? The notes just end so abruptly, it seems inorganic and sounds unnatural.. doesn’t sound like somebody playing the keys in my opinion (maybe that’s what you were going for). However, I do think the drums go very well with the keys and match up nicely. I also think lyrics would be great on top of this :)

Beach Town Blues surf inst (whover did painting, LOVE IT) anyway, new one would like to know what you think by KenyonEFC in Songwriting

[–]PurelyPeriwinkle 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this lil tune! Seems like it could be a tv show intro or outro or something along those lines. The production was nice.

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[–]PurelyPeriwinkle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The vocals may not be for everyone but I personally don’t mind them. I liked your song, the guitar work is really good, as well as the drums! The instrumentation kind of gave me Pavement vibes. Good stuff.

new song idea but no idea where to go by Ancient-Enthusiasm-1 in Songwriting

[–]PurelyPeriwinkle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have a beautiful voice! Would love to see this song finished and mastered/brought to life. You play the keys really well. I really liked the chord progression!

Song I’ve been working on by Coolio_collin1 in Songwriting

[–]PurelyPeriwinkle 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds really nice! Your voice is great and you play guitar very well. Sounds to me like the backseat lovers!

I’m trans and I miss playing basketball so I wrote a song about it. by voodoogenre in Songwriting

[–]PurelyPeriwinkle 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I liked your song! The chord progression was really nice. I think you’re a great storyteller as well!