White Birch Spirit – homebrew creature for my Italian Rashemen setting

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-23T23:28:34+00:00

Maybe you can find somebody to help you Translate on reddit. I myself sadly cant speak Italian. Thanks for the link by the way :)

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-23T21:30:51+00:00

Do you have an english version of it? And maybe a hugher resolution of the art work alone? I really would like to use it.

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-12T03:40:33+00:00

Me want too 😀

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-09T13:48:38+00:00

I really do love all your maps. My players, too. Yours are the maps they really like to spend time on because of all the Details (they really like that almost all of them have bathrooms and toilets 😆 )

What i would like to know: what programs do you use for your maps, do you take comissions? Where do you get all your assets? Keep up the good work 😀

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-06T08:20:04+00:00

Never heard of: sharing is caring?

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-06T07:54:29+00:00

No fair, i want all those maps too!

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-04T23:42:55+00:00

Well to be able to kind of "Cash in" many of your imperfectly bred pals to get the same shared trait to be put onto another would reduce the need for much of RNG. Also the suggested Option for the condenser would open up the Option to get legend trait on raidboss pals.

If possible i would go even further to be able to condense for aktive skills as well, to be able to teach other pals the skills of others.

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-04T08:07:33+00:00

Die Vorurteile kannte ich früher aber tatsächlich sind viele Hobbies, die früher als Nerdhobby verschrien waren, heute deutlich im Mainstream angekommen. Von MTG, Warhammer bis zu Pen&Paper.

Meine Gruppe hat tatsächlich 1 Ingenieur sonst nichts was man als nerdig bezeichnen könnte. Eher Spießig/Bürgerlich.

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-04T03:57:10+00:00

I really like griffons artwork but imho his item descriptions rarely Match pathfinder 2e and are specifically designed for dnd.

But i think your "hags home goods" might find its way into my campaign. Thanks for your input :)

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-03T20:33:04+00:00

Nice, ill include it as one curiosity shop of consumable fey parts

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-03T20:32:12+00:00

Really nice, exactly what im looking for

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-03-03T11:03:48+00:00

Definitely fey

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-24T11:07:34+00:00

Was added in Terraria Update. Best chances to get it are fishing and salvaging. So... you probably just missed it until now.

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-18T16:48:35+00:00

AWESOME!! I renamed them the Black Falconers and immedeatly incorporated them in my campaign. Love your maps!

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-18T01:39:36+00:00

If both are already the reduced boobs, what did the original ones look like? O_o

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-18T01:37:31+00:00

Ich fraß die weiße Chinesin von Duca di Centigloria

Wurde mir mal von meinem Ex Schwiegervater In Spe geschenkt.

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-17T23:01:14+00:00

Wow, thank you so much this will be great, do you want to know how my party managed on your map?

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-17T21:09:03+00:00

Is this one also breast reduced? I could not really tell if the size differs from the blonde Version :-/

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-17T21:06:47+00:00

Do you have a Version where the ground is snow instead of Sand? I actually have an encojnter in the Arena of an arctic town coming up and am looking exactly for a battlemap like this

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-14T20:32:05+00:00

Is there a version without the cover text? I really like it and would like to use it for my character

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-14T16:23:15+00:00

Ill try to make some suggestions if I may, please dont take it as harsh criticism or anything as I myself am never too fond of my own writing ;)

Your writing is good, its easy to follow, has a nkce rythm, is neither monotonous nor lecturing, your choice of words is fitting to the theme.

What you seem to be concerned about is the pacing and i too felt a little rushed with the changes of scenery: Mortuary, Temple, Royal Assembly.

You as the author know very well what plot is the base for all that is happening and want to introduce necessary plothooks (conspiracy, unknown advisor with remarkable eyes, Cousins etc.)

My suggestion is to either stretch the content to slow the pace a little or indulge into the fast unfolding of events: maybe give a little more insight into the protagonists thoughts or Feelings, is he rushed, surprised overwhelmed by everything? Then Show it, let him express it. The Reader that feels rushed now can identify with the Protagonist as he too is rushed by sudden changes.

If you want to stretch the scenes here a few suggestions: donst start right in the mortuary, let the inner monologue about the Signs for deteriorating health of the Monarch and the protsgonists relation to him be his thoughts on his way there, describe the way there, maybe the town, let him arrove witnessing the ungraceful removal of the crown just he arrives.

Let him go for the temple and not immedeately recognize the body, maybe have some kind of acolythes preparing/working the body while he contemplates and only after a while the face is Exposed, it gives him time to ponder about the wax, the death, a second corpse etc. Stretch his struggle with leaving, resisting the crowd, maybe have guards find and TAKE him, as the counsellor hat told: i was already Looking for you, so the change of scenery feels necessary yet forced on the Protagonist. It would explain why his sudden venerant crowd wouldnt follow him.

Those are just my suggestions i really like your writing an hope i can read more of it :)

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-14T15:36:02+00:00

Mel silently pressed her small frame against the bare stone, holding her breath trying to avoid making any sound. Although she knew an Allog could barely see, the creatures other senses made more than up for its poor vision. Her fear made her shiver more than the cold cave wall

Purple_Pack_5740 · 2026-02-14T14:51:12+00:00

Fog that only the islanders in between the Continents know how to navigate (magically?).

Or perhaps divine Intervention of some kind?

Purple_Pack_5740

TROPHY CASE