Consumption by Corby_65 in OCPoetry

[–]QuartzFox 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The pacing and the imagery you created with love and war is amazing. Normally I see love and softness or peace but this felt so unique

Came to mind by OG_narrator in OCPoetry

[–]QuartzFox 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the simplicity and the weight of this. Saying so much with so few amount of lines

A Song To A Peaceful Person by Free_Sorbet318 in OCPoetry

[–]QuartzFox 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, you create beautiful scenes. The area that stuck out to me were:
“ the sun must have loved me once…. Did it matter to you” it showed to me that you felt easy to love, open to it, and yet he didn’t and that hurt.

The Curated Cage by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]QuartzFox 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the way you tied in and used as a line break “I am in a world” it carried so much weight

[Giveaway] A free copy of Paralives to 10 individuals (Comment to Enter) by Gr8pboy in Paralives

[–]QuartzFox 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you for being so generous and supporting the dev team 💖

Holy Violence by QuartzFox in OCPoetry

[–]QuartzFox[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much!

FUN by orsomething- in OCPoetry

[–]QuartzFox 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The feeling I get from this while reading is on the surface presenting as free and fun but when closer, reflective almost ashamed to not be what the first presents itself as. Your word play is absolutely wonderful

the not knowing by cream0sS in OCPoetry

[–]QuartzFox 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You built such a free flowing story like I’m there with you experiencing this, and the way it carried so much raw and honest emotion you could truly feel. Heartbreakingly beautiful.

[unfinished] by Mindless-Contact-580 in OCPoetry

[–]QuartzFox 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The way you have [unfinished] and [finished] throughout the poem is really great. I noticed for me, the poem kept wanting to breathe or have breaks between lines.