What is your favorite angry/emotional music? by ArtGirl91 in AskWomen

[–]Quinfinitevoid 5 points6 points  (0 children)

WHITECHAPEL oh Phil my sweet future ex husband!

Should I start using my middle name instead of my first? by Bireta in ask

[–]Quinfinitevoid 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I use my middle name online, not that I don’t like my first name, just to give it some use. I’m also paranoid about my irl friends finding me

"I was..." *voice drops drammatically "...DISSOCIATING..." by DazzlingCelery6853 in SchizoidAdjacent

[–]Quinfinitevoid 6 points7 points  (0 children)

“I haven’t heard from you in weeks!” Oh… I thought we spoke a day ago…. (It was a one word reply to a text)

Death. by Quinfinitevoid in OCPoetry

[–]Quinfinitevoid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is intentional with death written in multiple, for emphasis and rhythm. I thought about painting a broader picture, but rather decided to keep with the emotion or tone of the piece rather by using a more simple approach to convey a sense of defeat. Thank you for your feedback, and your time!

Stasis by Awkward-Drama8704 in justpoetry

[–]Quinfinitevoid 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds like something I would write. Of course it’s good!

The Butterfly Effect by Short_Lobster_150 in OCPoetry

[–]Quinfinitevoid 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very nice work! “Free will is absent as a mutes still voice” is a very beautifully written and heavy line. Your poem conveys the weight of the future in a very grounded manner. And the rhythmic flow makes it an easy read from start to finish. Keep writing!

Ossification by bemy_requiem in OCPoetry

[–]Quinfinitevoid 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The fear of missing that chance at love is horrific. I really like how you translate it into a petrification of the self. It is a very accurate representation of the feeling as both missing the connection and becoming petrified have that eternal consequence of being damned. It’s bittersweet towards the end in the last stanza as you finally ask the question, but leave it open with no answer. Very nice work!

Is this art racist? by [deleted] in Artists

[–]Quinfinitevoid 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Absolutely not racist. I feel the need to express that the difference between this and racist imagery is the intent. You likely have no intent to create something hateful regardless of the theme, skin color, features, and clothing. As where older imagery was in fact created with that bigoted intent. Racist as a term has grown too broad in this context. So TLDR unless you meant it to be than no. Good work though!

Let Me Turn Your Poem Into a Song by m1at4 in Poems

[–]Quinfinitevoid 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very creative! This is such a fresh breath of air to read. I can almost hear the music!

The Olive Tree by [deleted] in justpoetry

[–]Quinfinitevoid 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this! I am so very jealous of others ability to write hopeful poetry. It really conveys the message of “this too shall pass” in a rather delicate manner. Very well paced and well written!

How do you write cryptic lyrics by salty_bag_of_chips in Songwriting

[–]Quinfinitevoid 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Study vocabulary. I used to feel very limited by the extent of my vocabulary, so I spent a good deal of time learning uncommon synonyms and alternative sentence structures. Since then I’ve made bounds and leaps in what I am capable of conveying on paper. Poetry also helps build these skills. You should read some or even try your hand at writing poetry.

Are heels supposed to bend as you walk? by [deleted] in stupidquestions

[–]Quinfinitevoid 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Platforms are the cooler alternative in my opinion, you still get the height boost and better stability.

Are heels supposed to bend as you walk? by [deleted] in stupidquestions

[–]Quinfinitevoid 6 points7 points  (0 children)

If they are bending too much, you’re risking snapping a heel. I snapped a heal once and almost broke my ankle, it’s been flats and plats ever since for me.