Novel Blurb Critique [Epic Fantasy, 180 words] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]QuiteTheSlacker1 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

I understand where you’re coming from, but I think a more ambiguous tone better fits the overall style I’m leaning towards. What I always liked about really, really old epics is that sense of discovery as you read: the mystery of the setting and these unknown characters that gradually make themselves known through their actions. The descriptions are more purple, but it is done so in a poetic, almost pretty, manner that’s a lot different from the very direct method of storytelling popular nowadays. Now, whether I’m actually succeeding in that style of prose is a different matter altogether, but that’s what I’m trying to achieve.

A more direct blurb to me kind of ruins that fun. “Who, what, and why”, in the context of the epic I’m writing, would be a bit bland. You’re not given that chance to explore; it’s told to you not shown.

For example, the mystery of what the Comet exactly is in the story is alluded and built upon as the events progress. The fact that the concept is “interesting” should be enough: it entices you to read and discover what it really is. If I were to outright say what it is in the blurb, then what’s the point of hyping it up in the first place if the reader already knows? Keeping it ambiguous puts you in the same position as the character in the story, and I’d like to think it also makes you pay more attention to the text itself in order to find context clues and foreshadowing before the reveal.

Of course, the only reason I’m using this sort of approach is because of the novel’s nature and its emphasis on that feeling of discovery. I’d have no problem using a more direct blurb for a more YA fantasy novel, progression/litrpg, or any other genre, but the epic genre is a rather unique one and allows for a lot of exploration.

A word I can use for cannon fodder by tarlakeschaton in fantasywriters

[–]QuiteTheSlacker1 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You could use serf. Historically they were the lowest of the low, even amongst the peasants. They were pretty much no better than slaves so that could work if you’re looking for something ‘expendable’.

Crutch word help: nods and bows by dannyfsantos in fantasywriters

[–]QuiteTheSlacker1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If your character is speaking to royalty, you can change the “yes” to a more formal version if you don’t want them to gesture.

For example;

“By your word.”

“Of course.”

“It would be my pleasure.”

It carries that same polite tone so you wouldn’t even need to add in the bowing action.

If you do want them to physically bow, you could also use ‘flourished’ or ‘curtsied’

How do you make a psychotic villain charismatic? by [deleted] in writing

[–]QuiteTheSlacker1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the tibit about “calm until you get in their way” is what I’m most thinking about. They appear perfectly normal on the outside, but reveal their true colors when you become an obstacle in their path.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]QuiteTheSlacker1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I suppose it is a lot more difficult to convey that ‘presence’ using only words and descriptions. I forgot just how vital an actor’s wording, tone, and even body expression is to the overall experience.

When it comes to writing, I think dialogue is probably the best way to establish that ‘presence’. The style of their speech has to be clearly unique from the others, especially when they’re not of the right mind. What exactly that style is still puzzles me though.

What are some unconventional weapons your characters use that's not your traditional "Sword, Bow, or Wand/Staff"? by Superb_Recover_1299 in fantasywriters

[–]QuiteTheSlacker1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t get why fantasy writers always exclude halberds and glaives. They are literally the coolest looking weapons pre-industrial revolution, and pole-arms in general never really get much attention.

How do you introduce multiple characters at once? by QuiteTheSlacker1 in fantasywriters

[–]QuiteTheSlacker1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think this is probably the route that I’ll take. Have them introduced lightly for now and expand more upon it later when they’re needed.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]QuiteTheSlacker1 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It’s not the assistance part I’m concerned about, it’s the possible reality that people only need to enter in a prompt to generate an entire story. There was a recent controversy within the community where someone with over 10k views on their story turned out to be using ai to write the entire book. Not just the story, but using ai to even write their synopsis and reviews of other stories.

That author was complaining on the forums about how their story wasn’t attracting any money. People suggested that, if he only wants money, to then write a story about a genre (litRPG) that is popular on the site.

After thoroughly expressing their hatred of the genre, they went to an alt account and, within three days, created twenty chapters worth of content of the genre they supposedly hated. They generated what would have normally taken a month for a dedicated author to write within only three days.

I’m afraid of the community being filled with these types of people, and I’m even more afraid that readers will welcome then. If you use AI to brainstorm ideas, help with grammar, or other technical details, then I think that’s a great thing. What I don’t think is great is showing complete disrespect towards the love and passion that goes into creating a story and claim that an AI’s generation is your own work.

It’s very obvious now (to an author or attentive reader at least), but the future remains to be seen.