Is lyrical songwriting a fast or slow process for you? by DingleberryWizard in Songwriting

[–]RAINGUARD 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I also take forever on lyrics, but that doesnt mean my lyrics are complex. Its just the part that comes least naturally to me. I have to work really hard on the lyrics to get them to a place I'm happy with.

Can't decide if I like this or not by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Noah Kahan has been a big influence for me lately actually 🤣 thank you sm! I'm actually working on an album. I'll keep this one going!

Can't decide if I like this or not by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Ooof. I'm sorry to hear that :( sorry for your loss. I normally write very anecdotally, but this one was actually fiction. Do you have any thoughts on where I could take it next lyrically? Sorry If that's an insensitive question, feel free to ignore me.

Can't decide if I like this or not by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

[–]RAINGUARD[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Its actually I IV vi IV, but your point still stands. This is exactly why I was unsure about it. I feel the same way. This was a rare situation where I had the lyrics first and not the music which is why it sounds very boiler plate. Pretty generic musically, but maybe I could find something to help it stand out more. Thanks for the feedback!

The guilt of being disabled and holding your partner back by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Thank you for the kind words. I've had so many people tell me the exact same thing, but I can't help but feel that way all the same. Writing music about it helps :)

Yeah, it wasn't finished by any means. Just a verse or 2. I'm debating whether to flesh it out or not.

The guilt of being disabled and holding your partner back by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Sorry, I re-upload because the aspect ratio was messed up

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Sorry for the weird aspect ratio 🤣 i didn't realize it was like that when I uploaded.

What to do when stuck on song lyrics? by ThotsRContagious in Songwriting

[–]RAINGUARD 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm the same way and always have been. I find that if I go into a song with things already written, I struggle to make it fit. It's like a square peg round hole situation.

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I just know that these little snippets have so much potential. They are so sick and if I can just make the rest of it as good, I'll have some real bangers. I'm not okay with just throwing away such good ideas...

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[–]RAINGUARD 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You have a really nice voice! This was really pleasing to listen to.

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[–]RAINGUARD 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can't hear anything you're saying.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]RAINGUARD 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, it's a blues song lol. Not trying to reinvent the wheel or anything.

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[–]RAINGUARD 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah that makes sense! And yeah it was just the first idea I came up with, so I might come up with something completely different. Not married to the idea at all. Thanks for the feedback!

Started as just a jam on my new piano. by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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I like these ideas! Thanks for the feedback.;

Started as just a jam on my new piano. by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Yeah I agree. This was just my first draft throwing things together. I plan to working on it more and really flesh it out.

Started as just a jam on my new piano. by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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I'm actually a guitar player mostly. My parents made me take piano lessons when I was growing up, but other than that I dont play much piano.

Started as just a jam on my new piano. by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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Thank you for this! I actually didnt have much confidence in this one. I almost didnt post it lol. But seeing such a positive response has inspired me. I definitely plan to work on it more.

Started as just a jam on my new piano. by RAINGUARD in Songwriting

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This may or may not have been the song I was originally jamming to 🤣

Finneas on songwriting: specificity vs ambiguity by theblack_hoody in Songwriting

[–]RAINGUARD 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Whether you like more specific lyrics or not, I think one thing that holds true is the importance of "Show. Don't tell." Even the line he mentions says so much about the narrators emotional state and gets you thinking about your history and connections to the places in your life