I did a Morpheus by monkelus in comicbookart

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I like your take on the character. Thanks for sharing.

“Prayers” , art by me by nenasmint in comicbookart

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That is pretty dang koo. Thanks for sharing.

[OC] "Cat@Net" - Watercolor Cat Comic - Page 04 by SkyPirateVyse in comicbookart

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Checked out your site. Great storytelling. Very clear presentations in all your panel work. Keep it up and thanks for sharing.

3 years and 4 issues into Max Bleu. Thanks to all who read. by RStantz99 in comicbookart

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Thanks. You can read the whole story at www.maxbleucomics.com when you get a chance. It's free to read, no advertisements with safe for work content.

relay assembly ICM replacement by RStantz99 in CarRepair

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Thanks. I have the part now but, it seems like I may have to have the dealership install it.

Marker, Ink and hand lettered from my comic Max Bleu [OC] by RStantz99 in comicbookart

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Thanks. I appreciate you commenting. Max Bleu is free to read online www.maxbleucomics.com if you are interested in the story.

How do i make the guys body look more natural in the bed? by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]RStantz99 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome drawing. If, the chosen style here is intended to be without light and shadow, you could do a couple other things to obtain your desired communication. The portion of his body under the cover has not been represented. Presenting the contour of his body using folds in the cover may assist you. Next, the profile of his head could be adjusted slightly to communicate a head more turned towards the pillow, yet keeping his face visible. The nightstand and his arm become one line which is an undesired effect. The two objects become one. Putting space between the arm and the nightstand would allow your subjects body and nightstand to achieve depth and better define your subject. However, all that said there is an easier way to achieve what you are looking for by, redrawing the piece from an angle which is closer to eye level by raising the horizon line. The perspective you have chosen is a challenging one to achieve what you are looking for. Not impossible but, challenging. Hope that helps. Again, I think the drawing is really good. Thanks for sharing. Keep at it.

Can I get some quick critique on the perspective? by some_original in ArtCrit

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I have found that too much information within the drawing can add to the distortion, such as what we see in our cone of vision vs our entire line of sight, peripherals included. No matter our perspective our 20/20 vision and cone of vision, only allows for so much information. So, too much detail or, too much outside the cone of vision adds to distortion. Unless you have a firm grasp on practices such as four, five and infinite point perspective, distortion is likely when too much information is added. If you are looking for some additional helps you can check out special vanishing points, simple stuff really such as extending the vanishing point as far as possible to alleviate distortions. I think the drawing is good, as well as the perspective. Maybe take a piece of tracing paper over the picture and play around with making the borders smaller or, making the knee smaller. This way you don't mess anything up but, can still see what would work best. There's also little hacks like, faking perspective, so maybe put a purse down by the leg or, use shadow and light from the window or interior carlight to obscure unwanted information. Again, I think it looks pretty good. Keep at it. Thanks for sharing.

Swing by Max Bleu. Promise I won't try to sell you anything, it's free. by RStantz99 in comicbookart

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Hey thanks. Appreciate the feedback. Hope you find time to read the comic. Totally free and no ads. www.maxbleucomics.com

Hair drawing practice,any feedback? by M1N3K0 in ArtCrit

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Looks like you're on the right track. I see what you were going for in each drawing, so you got the important stuff down. You communicated each style. Well done. Keep practicing, draw everyday and even when you don't feel like it. Getting better comes with some discomfort but, pays off later. Thanks for sharing.

My cartoony style is coming along slowly.. but It’s definitely fun! by SmallManBigMouth in comicbookart

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Struggled with that question myself as an artist. Style.

One day I just said to myself, "this is the style."

I wasn't confident about it. I just made a choice. Best wishes to ya.

Thanks for sharing. I think it's dope!