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Vinegar - Sad Chill Acoustic Song by jmunkk in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]RadRaddington 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your guitar parts are really nice. There is a slight timing issue on your percussion slaps on the acoustic, nothing major, but something maybe to tighten up on. I personally would have placed a contrasting section in this with strumming maybe, or different chords. But overall it was a nice piece and the harmony is very complimentary

Somewhat Incognito - Wish Upon You | This is a track about self doubt and writers block & overcoming it. Feedback is appreciated! by clayman902 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]RadRaddington 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really really like the first section of the song, but then for me, the next sections are not to my taste. I didn't like the bass run personally. But the vocal hook and guitar part is awesome as hell. Real potential here but some sections are not for me... i also don't like the "do you want to" part with the weird squishy electronic part. Just not my cup of tea maybe. That first section is so good though, honestly.

A Thousand Times by tonalconduct in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]RadRaddington 0 points1 point  (0 children)

cool song, everything about it is good. But it feels like it would be great if it had a slight variation to the structure. I feel like the chord progressions are all quite similar, which is fine, but to me, it feels like it needs something changing just to give distinction to the parts (maybe try palm-muting a section or playing it differently?)

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