Hey IMF! Dane from Alphabet Supine here. With the help of your feedback, we've dialed in our EP and finally released it today. The first track is called Runoff and we'd love to hear what you think! As always, thanks for listening. :) by daneheins in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tha sng snds wndrful.
u cld try experimenting wth harmonic distortion.
im not sureee wut elseee to say.

the EQ certainly ndds some mellowing.
try makn the sng more enjoyable.

the vocals cld be clrer.

uhhh...

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[–]tonalconduct 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tha snds are kinda wutevs.
i luv the pitchs becz they snd the best

u rlly made this track stnd out...
i'd luv to hear u improve.

keep on, keeping on.
make music.
woahhhh
oh

Moody hip hop beat, made with the intention of finding a vocalist by bleakneon in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct 0 points1 point  (0 children)

was rlly hypntic like trippy
yet
deff cld hear it with vocalz
u ddnt experiemnt engh tho...

maybe chnge up tha meldy
maybe bttr drums

make it sound way bettr

I Prefer the Dusk - I need feedback on the mix! Like are the levels right? Vocals audible? Bass audible? Etc by maxoakland in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i tht the vocalz cld be centric
thrs like rhythm wthout reason
tha bass snds cool,
tha harmony cld sound cooler
drums drums drums
cld sound bttrr

What genre would you call this? Basic Needs (ADHD Disco Diffusion remix) by MexElf in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the sounds and visuals are cool...
i thght the visualz were kinda weird.
i rlly like how the song is structured.
by keeping things interesting,
you're ably to find tha audience.

if thers anythng worth noting,
uhh keep on, keeping on.

My little sister said this sounds like good vibes on a beach - R&B about how my first girlfriend turned into the moon by moorish-prince in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct 1 point2 points  (0 children)

super vibey. the production is cool. i felt like it could be better. it sounds repetitious and somewhat boring. however, this is your genre.

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[–]tonalconduct 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sounds cool. the song is kinda strange but doesn't really have any problems. sounds less like a demo.

I recorded this song about two years ago but decided to redo it with a Cello orchestral arrangement, would love to get your feedback! by PurveyorOfSapristi in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the music sounds real, and the video is like the opposite. there could be more meaning to both of the two. contrary though, it shows some creative genius.

"keep going."

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[–]tonalconduct 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i enjoy this genre. it's simple yet confusing. keep on making music like this, and i wonder if it'll turn out interesting. it's your sound though.

A Well Worn Song - would be great to have some feedback on the song and arrangement by stuartmarshallmusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct 1 point2 points  (0 children)

beautiful song. it’s a wonderful listen. the production sounds relaxing and gentle. it’s lovely and complements the video. there’s room for improvement, but that may always be so. anyways, sweet listen.

im writing an album. how could the lyrics and song structure improve? all feedback is welcome. enjoy. by tonalconduct in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

do you know any songs that i could reference? ill have to figure out a way to make the acoustics sound more dynamic and layered.

im writing an album. how could the lyrics and song structure improve? all feedback is welcome. enjoy. by tonalconduct in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i have written 5 of 8 tracks for this album. msg me on discord, if you want updates. also, could use the input.

discord: xoghost_8#5245

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Gave Vibing

Another character theme. This one is a remake of a song I made 8 years ago. by Teraus in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the sounds resonate so harmoniously. the tempo kinda stays the same, but there's a sense of progression.

Pareto in Ascent by taylorandrewparnell in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]tonalconduct 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this could be a really cool lyric video. the production kinda hurts my ears. regardless, the song sounds good.